Review Detail of don_offl in Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]

Alright I stopped reading at chapter six because the story development was very good so I wanted to read slowly to enjoy it more I didn't want to rush it because of a review swap chapter 1 and two were slow going but the moment the chapter 3 started i was hooked of course there are some very confusing lines and grammar mistakes in the novel i think it can be ignored. I hope there is no harem or Xiao Fan turns into a guardian who saves everyone and being a goody two shoes, the one thig i wanted to share with the author is try to describe the world around the mc what he feels or whats he plans to do to make it more interesting and show the readers rather than telling which is only a tiny bit minus i could find. Overall its a great novel, for a general reader like me this novel is a good read and i hope author wouldn't drop the novel due to lack of attention because this novel has the potential to reach higher level