Review Detail of InoueAkio in Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]

Anyone wanting to read this book should listen to InoueAkio here. From the tone of this review, I can see that you have actually made it till 182, and I have to agree with your points. The story plotting and character development aren't my strongest suit. Though character development has been happening in my eyes, and chapters 182 & 183 would have been about the biggest character devolvement till now. I could go on forever about how I see my book, but that would be useless, completely useless. If you the reader wasn't captivated, I as the author, writing this book for you have failed. I want to add that I would want to hear more of your opinion on the shortfallings of the book, and, if possible, how could they be fixed. Thanks for the review, it was very helpful.

Hmm...okay you being humble made me blush a little but moving on to your novel in my perspective.. First thing MC is what who drives the story and yeah I can understand his personality for few chaps but prolongation of it over 150+ chaps, in my opinion not a wise choice and also plot should revolve around the choices MC make but due to his personality, the story gets driven with either his girls or the god... Second I'd say improve the pacing a little bit, what make us readers intrigued and more indulged in the story is when you've the least idea what comes next or you get something unexpected with how progresses means you dupe the readers with how the plot may end and let them experience mixture of emotions throughout it....But you should be clear of the plot whether it's starting or ending cuz that's the difference between an original and a fan fic.... And lastly try to cut out the boring bits like the workout regime and few more things which were over explanatory and wasn't required that much, status quo with the MC must change means not everytime he fails to keep up with the expectations and MOST IMPORTANT don't have a powerless mc for this long cuz nobody likes them cuz we readers want to experience something different from our daily life by indulging overselves in the manga, anime and whatever other things where we have a different perspective rather than our daily boring life where we're powerless to change anything so we try to find solace in these fictional characters and try to put ourselves into MC's shoes if given chance to act or hypothetically given a chance to be that MC...So do you think people if given chance to reincarnate they'd be willing this one's life cuz if you can't satisfy their tastes, they'd be forced to find it somewhere else even if they don't get this descriptive storytelling but they'll still be sticking with that one because no one ponder over each monologue which happened with the mc but what's his [STATUS] and believe me no one like pushover MC's.... That's all, hope I'm not offending much but these are my real thoughts on this topic and cuz your reply was too humble I was forced to explain my reasons....👍

Hmm...okay you being humble made me blush a little but moving on to your novel in my perspective.. First thing MC is what who drives the story and yeah I can understand his personality for few chaps but prolongation of it over 150+ chaps, in my opinion not a wise choice and also plot should revolve around the choices MC make but due to his personality, the story gets driven with either his girls or the god... Second I'd say improve the pacing a little bit, what make us readers intrigued and more indulged in the story is when you've the least idea what comes next or you get something unexpected with how progresses means you dupe the readers with how the plot may end and let them experience mixture of emotions throughout it....But you should be clear of the plot whether it's starting or ending cuz that's the difference between an original and a fan fic.... And lastly try to cut out the boring bits like the workout regime and few more things which were over explanatory and wasn't required that much, status quo with the MC must change means not everytime he fails to keep up with the expectations and MOST IMPORTANT don't have a powerless mc for this long cuz nobody likes them cuz we readers want to experience something different from our daily life by indulging overselves in the manga, anime and whatever other things where we have a different perspective rather than our daily boring life where we're powerless to change anything so we try to find solace in these fictional characters and try to put ourselves into MC's shoes if given chance to act or hypothetically given a chance to be that MC...So do you think people if given chance to reincarnate they'd be willing this one's life cuz if you can't satisfy their tastes, they'd be forced to find it somewhere else even if they don't get this descriptive storytelling but they'll still be sticking with that one because no one ponder over each monologue which happened with the mc but what's his [STATUS] and believe me no one like pushover MC's.... That's all, hope I'm not offending much but these are my real thoughts on this topic and cuz your reply was too humble I was forced to explain my reasons....👍

Dude, you made so far in the novel. Like you spent so much time reading my book that I can't argue against your opinion. If I want to make this book better, I need to digest this type of criticism coming from people like you more than anything. Then use it to improve the book. Moving on to the Mc. Doesn't he already have small developments in chapters 17, 21/22 and 53? The problem with him becoming a full-time badass lies in his backstory, he has nothing to go by other than some random teaching from the "old man", so he can't progress quickly. And yes, I'm fully aware that Mc is a punching bag for the girls and the god, for sure, that is changing. Your second thing? I'm not sure of what you meant, but I think you are referring how he moves from place to place and doesn't spend a whole lot of time anywhere? I too, have come to this conclusion and have been thinking of rewriting all of those places to have more in them. Meaning the tribe wars, Hefei, and Hangzhou "archs". (yet this would also add into the chapter count) Sure, there are boring bits, can't argue against that either. Should change as time goes own. Sure, I get your feeling as a reader. It is somewhat stupid to come back from a job, school, etc. and read about an Mc that is doing worse than oneself :D I have been trying to balance the long wait with writing a lot of epic or funny moments, but not enough I suppose. Offend me? Nah, my own thinking/mind is too warped, if anything, I like this. And again would love to hear more and in greater detail xD Someone like you giving me input like this might be enough for me to change everything. Thanks for replying to me.