Review Detail of Sigheti in Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]
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Although the story supports a good storyline, the execution has room for improvement. Although I noted the writing quality to gradually improve in more recent chapters, I must confess that I find the characters themselves to be rather lacking. While the story does not lack character growth, I often don’t feel compassionate towards the characters because I still don’t feel as if I know them. They feel as characters in the making rather than established persona. And while the author seems to have a clear idea of them, as a reader I feel as if I cannot truly grasp them. Grammar wise there are some faults, but since I have been known to wrestle with this myself, I understand your struggles completely.
Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]
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Characters? Sure I know exactly where their personas are going, but yeah, most of them just don't get enough screen time. Though again, that is just because they are so new, moreover none of them will stop and say this is my place and my persona. They will all move forward, usually outside the influence of MC or even me. Hasn't your persona changed in the last 2 years? Did this help?
f1n:Characters? Sure I know exactly where their personas are going, but yeah, most of them just don't get enough screen time. Though again, that is just because they are so new, moreover none of them will stop and say this is my place and my persona. They will all move forward, usually outside the influence of MC or even me. Hasn't your persona changed in the last 2 years? Did this help?
f1n:Characters? Sure I know exactly where their personas are going, but yeah, most of them just don't get enough screen time. Though again, that is just because they are so new, moreover none of them will stop and say this is my place and my persona. They will all move forward, usually outside the influence of MC or even me. Hasn't your persona changed in the last 2 years? Did this help?