Review Detail of ManDeleted12345 in Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]
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Interesting story, but the writing is bad, as in grammar. You should revise it your self, or get an editor/reviser. I like the story so far, but every time I read your writing I'm thinking of ways that could of been fixed, and it just annoys me.
Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]
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Thanks for your criticism this is what I want. I know that grammar is my biggest mistake, yet I don't know much how I can improve it anymore still trying my best and I think I'm getting better, and as of right now I have been using Grammarly and TTS to fix grammatical errors which are in the hundreds after I start to edit it my self. Good that you like the story.
bro try using Grammarly it should help you, but be careful sometimes it changes the meaning of the whole sentence by just changing a word.
f1n:Thanks for your criticism this is what I want. I know that grammar is my biggest mistake, yet I don't know much how I can improve it anymore still trying my best and I think I'm getting better, and as of right now I have been using Grammarly and TTS to fix grammatical errors which are in the hundreds after I start to edit it my self. Good that you like the story.