Review Detail of 816D35 in Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]

Item: Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]
Rating: 3.2

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I 'm sure it is unfair to judge your hard work only after reading only six chapters. That being said, I made some remarques that I like to share with you: Firstly, the story so far is good as a whole, but you need to do a lot of editing because it's tedious to read your writing. secondly, You need to redo your outline of events so it becomes clearer to follow. thirdly, you worked so hard at this so at least redo the synopsis and first chapter. good luck!

Towards Godhood [Hiatus again]

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I have been working on the synopsis. Editing, yeah for sure, I know that when I edit the chapters the next day after writing them I get the feeling.

4yr

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Try this Synopsis: 'By a stoke of luck', Xiao Fan got himself a spiritual advisor. He was hoping his life whould be all the better because of it. unfortunatly, his life seems to get a turn for the worst. That is to be expected,since the person supposed to help him would rather see him facing diffuculties and getting defeated.

4yr