Reviews of The Lotus And The Peach Blossom Men

Dayum!!!!! This story is so freaking awesome!!!!!!!!! w(°ｏ°)w I can't help but gritted my teeth as i see the situation shi mei ended up with. I want more update!!!!!!!! The interaction!! The challenges she faced.. everything is so interesting!! I can't wait to see what you have in store in the future!!

I really like the overall concept behind the book. The opening lines were actually really comedic in a way that gave the whole story an interesting perspective. Also, your cover is really cute! I definitely think you gave yourself too low of a rating in your self review, but I did dock off a bit (not that much) for grammar and formatting issues along with the introduction of the characters. The beginning of the story with the four names was slightly hard to keep track of, and even though the later introductions were much better, it took me some time to sort through who exactly was who. That being said, this story does have a lot of promise! Good luck!

Well written. The synopsis is good but maybe once the story progresses further, you might need to edit it. Minimal errors but I would recommend a little bit of editing to make the novel have a smooth reading. I hope to see many more chapters in the future. One more suggestion would be to shorten the huge paragraphs into a smaller one. I like the story so far!! Awesome start! Cheers to the author! Enjoy writing!

Ok, so let me just say this, I'm a type of reader that when I like the synopsis, I'll definitely read the novel. And for your novel, it really got my attention, I love how you made your synopsis!Therefore I read it, but when I did I truely really enjoyed it! I love your writing style author, it's easy to understand. Not too much complicated words and it's just right. I also love the story, just suits my taste.I had fun, will definitely continue reading this!

Fair warning: I like to give reviews solely based upon the first chapter—because in my opinion, it is the most important chapter of the entire novel. Don't worry, I read ahead and will mention that later. Synopsis: Didn't really catch my attention till the last line. I think with a little rewording and different sentence structure it can be an amazing attention grabber. Nonetheless, better than most synopsis' I see on here so nicely done. Grammar: I can see English isn't your first language yes? Me too — don't worry — it'll get better the more you write. I was still able to read fine with a few grammar mistakes here and there making me re-read the sentence, but nothing is really bad, so nice job. Story/everything else: I always found dialogue at the beginning of the very first paragraph of the novel slightly confusing. It is a very hard thing to pull of correctly, and very hard to execute with later paragraphs. What Im saying is that putting dialogue at the beginning doesn't give me a clear image of what is happening. Yes, thei'r talking. yes, the have names. But who are they? What do they look like? Is there a special tone in their voice I should imagine? Are they sitting or standing? Are they outside or inside? Do they have an accent? These are some things you should consider. Also, I got pretty confused with the four different names to keep track of so early on. I had to reread a few times to understand who was talking to whom and so on.( Just a thought ) Overall, The story is cool and something new to me. My only recommendation is to just keep writing, reading, and improving. I am just an a m a t e u r writer so take this with a grain of salt if you must. I am simply stating my opinion as a reader and a reviewer! Anyhow, well done! and upload more chapters!

As they all say, It has a promising start. This is a very interesting story, would love to continue reading this! I added this wonderful story to my Library.

This is a pretty good start if I'm going to be honest. Some grammatical errors here and there but nothing that makes it difficult to read. I like the general story overview, and the pacing is really good. I'm sure that within another 5 chapters you'll be putting out content that will be really really good. Keep working hard!

A promising start. Quite the quality effort compared to a majority of new stories. Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over won't fix. Prose is wonderfully descriptive enough but not too cumbersome to read. As is the dialogue, being natural and flowing smoothly makes for a pleasant reading experience. I'll be keeping an eye on this. Keep on writing👍

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I’m really liking the story. And the characters seem to be interesting. I like the banters and “kid fights” too. I believe this story has potential. However, one thing that I think can help the story become even more better is editing the text more carefully. The grammatical errors are good in number and sometimes they make the reader confused. Other than that, I really like the story, keep on writing! 💕

Lucky me to find this story! I gladly love how you describe each scene as t was so detailed, well, Prose is Excellent. Love your way of writing I added it to my library, and I'll keep an eye on this story because It has much potential!

Hello, shamelessly writing a review for my own story but I just want to encourage you. Though it's my first time to start writing a story in a language that I'm not proficient, I assure you that this story will be worth reading. I hope you will spend your valuable time and support this story. Thank You. Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. [Credits to the rightful owner]