Review Detail of Jenjibread in The Lotus And The Peach Blossom Men

I really like the overall concept behind the book. The opening lines were actually really comedic in a way that gave the whole story an interesting perspective. Also, your cover is really cute! I definitely think you gave yourself too low of a rating in your self review, but I did dock off a bit (not that much) for grammar and formatting issues along with the introduction of the characters. The beginning of the story with the four names was slightly hard to keep track of, and even though the later introductions were much better, it took me some time to sort through who exactly was who. That being said, this story does have a lot of promise! Good luck!