Review Detail of Darlene_Virginia in The Lotus And The Peach Blossom Men

Well written. The synopsis is good but maybe once the story progresses further, you might need to edit it. Minimal errors but I would recommend a little bit of editing to make the novel have a smooth reading. I hope to see many more chapters in the future. One more suggestion would be to shorten the huge paragraphs into a smaller one. I like the story so far!! Awesome start! Cheers to the author! Enjoy writing!