Review Detail of Nagisa_Chwan in The Lotus And The Peach Blossom Men

I’m really liking the story. And the characters seem to be interesting. I like the banters and “kid fights” too. I believe this story has potential. However, one thing that I think can help the story become even more better is editing the text more carefully. The grammatical errors are good in number and sometimes they make the reader confused. Other than that, I really like the story, keep on writing! 💕