Reviews of The Lawes Girl

This one is a hidden gem. The writing quality is great and the story itself is very engaging. The author's choice of words feeds my imagination and I could imagine the scenes clearly. Great Job author!~

This novel has such a nice and well-written beginning. The descriptions are really good and the design is interesting as well. Good work author.

Your characters are well detailed with a very smooth and exciting style. The setting is imaginable and well detailed as well. Every sentence creates a different atmosphere for a reader. I love the mood you create between the character. I look forward for more!

amazing read !! I really enjoyed reading this novel. The story is captivating enough to keep readers engaged. Loved how the events unfolded!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!

This is a very well written story. Great characters and flowing naration that makes for an interesting read. The setting is a modern office scene and some real life issues. Well done! Worth the time!

Words that flow like wine, an exposition that has an air of mystery, and like the finest of Chardonnay, the taste of the plot, echoing prose, and sylogisms linger long after the first sip!

I really enjoyed it and it was well-written, but what's stopping me to give this a high review is because of the lock chapters. I enjoyed it up to the chapters that aren't locked, so I was saddened that when some chapters are lock.

It was a good story. The development and characterization were also nicely done. I think it could be better if you elaborate on the synopsis. I also noted that there are some grammatical errors that need to be corrected and quite a number of misused punctuation marks. Some paragraphs were a bit long, and dividing it would be nice. It was confusing in some parts, so revising some errors could make it better for the readers. The plotline was great, and so was the overall story.

The story is well thought and is going in a direction that I personally very much adore. I would recommend the author to be a bit more regular. The grammatical mistakes are to a minimum so that's a plus point. All the best

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Great book, well written story, excellent creativity and interseting plot. Chapters have the power to pull the readers attraction from the very beginning. Moreover, the writer has a unique way of writing and describing everything, which is really good. The only problem is that the chapters are too few. Would recommend to upload more chapters. All and all though the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.

Amazing story you got here. Your descriptions make me feel like I'm actually in the story myself! I look forward to seeing how this one ends ♡ My only suggestion is to beef up your synopsis and add some tags so people can find this amazing story easier!

This book is awesome, the character designs are well-written, it feels realistic, the writing quality is good, story development is going well. It was a great reading experience for me. I look forward to more updates and I will recommend everyone who is into this genre to give this book a go.

This story is a breath of fresh air from some of the others on the site. It's got a unique writing style with an equally unique story. It wastes no time getting into the action and the character development. Incredible story.

It's rare of me to give a 5/5. But this story deserves every bit of it and even more. You will be pulled into the story from the very first chapter. I love the characterization too. Would love to see more updates Author.Kudos! Keep going! All the best!

I went into this not sure what to expect, as this genre isn't something I'm interested in, however, the writing qualiy was fantastic, as well as the author's mastery of written conversation. I loved it. 5/5 Stars and I don't give that rating very often.

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Nice compelling story. I can say that this was amazing work. I am engrossed with the author's narration. Also, the writing quality and style was decent and proper. Kudos!

Ok so, the writing is amazing. The setting was so amazingly described. Every line n the story further cemented a mood. The updates seemed steady but they stopped so I'm just gonna rate that lowly. The development of the story slowly introduced characters, so it was nice. Over all great. [img=recommend]

This story is very interesting. The start catches you to know what happens next. And then... and then.. It doesn't stop. The writing style is great. It is easy flowing. Great work author.