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I had so much delight reading this novel. The author sure has an interesting writing style. Fresh and unique—those words describe the sentences I read in each chapter. There are times this story reminds me of those coming-of-age tales. So beautifully done and full of meaningful words. Overall, I recommend it. This book is a very lovely journey!
- Nikkie_LZ1yrCommentedCh 6 "Case No. 1" Fate gives you a chance.
- Nikkie_LZ1yrReplied to UNNATI_AWASTHICh 6 Hurts Like The Sky Was Pouring
- Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented"No, this is a good move; if the second prince realised he had been tricked into marrying the wrong person, the small bond holding the two families would finally be broken. If the two elephants fight, this will be good for us," General Bruce said. The old general looked around to see if anyone noticed the flaws in this plan.
- Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
bruhh
"In the next three months, we must ensure that the cold war between the two families becomes stronger. To achieve this, we have a few men in Gousho; let them spike a rumour of the Princess having an affair and ensure it gets to the Royal family of Gousho; they will definitely be displeased. After all, no man would want to marry an indecent woman. Meanwhile, the news must be presented in a manner that put king Lorenzo in the know of the Princess's indecent behaviour but supported and shielded her," Ramsey said. - Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
Actually, that really did happen in history, sadly tho
"What?" The Princess felt like her ears were deceiving her; she had never imagined her marriage would become a tool for the royal family. - Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
Author, how about breaking up this into small paragraphs?
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It's a promising start. I rarely read male MC, but this one was good. The writing is very simple so is easy to understand. I can't really say much because there are only 2 chapters so far. My only suggestion is to revise your paragraph length in chapter two because sometimes long paragraphs are tedious to get through. Overall, it was an enjoyable novel. Keep working hard author-sama!
- Nikkie_LZ1yrReplied to PerkyPompous_PixieCh 3 Burned Fate
- Nikkie_LZ1yrReplied to PerkyPompous_PixieCh 5 3 Months After Waking Up From Coma
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- Nikkie_LZ1yrPosted
So here we have—our boss queen. Such funny and powerful FL. You definitely need to read her journey and her 99 ways to tame her xd. I wonder who would be the ML. Although it has just a few chapters, this is a hidden gem. So much potential. Well done author-sama!!! Note: "WARNING: FL is narcissistic and arrogant"—love the warning btw. Overall, beautifully done!
- Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
you drop that --> crown<-- my queen
The host and other people felt goosebumps by looking at her evil smile. That reminds them, that she was not someone to mess with. - Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
what are they!!! Hello?? She can do whatever she wants. Just look at her money!
"She is not at all modest." Angelina began to be mocked by the live audience. - Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
really? Bruhhhh
"Should I get roses or lilies?" the young actor asked. "This is my chance. "I can definitely make her fall for me," Jackson stated. - Nikkie_LZ1yrCommented
EWWW
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