Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in The Lawes Girl

It was a good story. The development and characterization were also nicely done. I think it could be better if you elaborate on the synopsis. I also noted that there are some grammatical errors that need to be corrected and quite a number of misused punctuation marks. Some paragraphs were a bit long, and dividing it would be nice. It was confusing in some parts, so revising some errors could make it better for the readers. The plotline was great, and so was the overall story.