Right out the gate, you do a great job introducing your story and you have great writing style. I'm grateful for the opportunity to read your story!

Wayyy better than a lot of the stuff I see on here. The story's progressing nicely, the dialogue feels fairly natural, and you've done a great job creating the setting. Good job!

Great story! My biggest complaint about this novel so far is that I didn't read it sooner! Overall, great job and I'm sure the rest will be just as good!

Great concept and great world building. Your writing style fits into the Webnovel platform great and it's honestly a shame that you haven't gotten as much publicity as you deserve, even if it is a fairly new novel.

Excellent use of vocabulary. The author clearly has a command of the English language. Right from the start, the story's captivating and pulls you in. Great job so far!

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

Great world building, and good writing style. I think you'd really benefit from an editor though, not cause you're a bad writer, but just because there's a few things that don't seem normal for a native english speaker. You're really phenomenal though. Keep it up!

Great first chapter! I know I'm way late to this novel, but I'm excited to read the rest of it!

I love the author's writing style. It's short and concise without losing the detail of a longer paragraph. Although the story's not the most unique thing in the world, it's really well portrayed.

Haha, of course. You're killing it!

No, stick with it man! it's you, and I love it!

I really like the MC's character design. They're language, as well as the way they think distinguishes them a lot.

Thank you so much for your review! It means a ton coming from an author like yourself!

Honestly, a great novel from what I've read so far. Your descriptive language is on point, the world seems unique and interesting, and although your writing style is unique, I don't have a horribly hard time following it. Great job!

The author has a really unique writing style, and in this case, it's not bad at all. The use of punctuation could be improved, but the story's still easy to read, and the use of detail's well done.

It's a great introduction to the overarching story. I appreciated the foreword giving a brief background of each individual character. The one piece of criticism I have is to make every chapter about three times the length you've been making them. Keep writing! You're doing great!

Overall, fantastic character creation, decent use of punctuation, and a great story! I really enjoyed how unique and carefully crafted each individual character is. Keep at it!

Good start! The plot's fairly easy to follow, and the characters are uniquely personalized. This chapter was a great introduction to the rest of the novel. Overall, good job! keep writing!

I appreciate it. You really are doing great! I can't wait to work my way through the last three chapters.

Great character design for Lady Amran, and you did a great job of describing both the clothing of Lady Amran, as well as the scenery. Sometimes I wish there was a little more to let me know who's talking and when, but it's normally not too difficult to tell.