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The Last Primal
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The Last Primal

Shaele

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What is The Last Primal

The Last Primal is a popular web novel written by the author Shaele, covering SYSTEM, REINCARNATION, HARÉM, ROMANCE, GAME ELEMENTS, ACTION, ADVENTURE, DRAGON ABILITY, FANTASY, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 1.3M readers with an average rating of 4.44/5 and 45 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 178 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Darkness. The ultimate ruler, the true One-Above-All. Everything starts from it, and everything returns to it eventually. People say that in your final moments, darkness seeps in your very existence, engulfs your whole being. They say it’s an incredibly relaxing feeling that takes you on your journey to your afterlife. They say that in the very darkness, the ‘nothingness’ your weary soul will finally be able to rest and relax. This brings up some very philosophical and existential questions. Do you even exist? Follow the epic journey of Aiden, the last primal, a unique and ancient race as he finds his place in a strange, new world, filled with threats and violence. ----- If you would like to reach out to me, my discord tag is: Shaele#5221 Don't worry, I don't bite (too hard)! ----- This story (and the world itself) is something I started writing and creating 15 years ago, while I was telling stories with my friends in our regular D&D sessions. The world is a hand-crafted fantasy world, filled with history and lore that we created over the course of years. While I may be new to the writing scene, I will do my very best to bring you an enjoyable experience. UPDATE: The current schedule (from September 2020): 1 chapter EVERY DAY (between 1500-1700 words) One final note: I plan to write R-18 chapters later as well (the first one is planned to happen between chapter 170-190), but as you will see from the flow of the story, this is not feasible for the short term. While I have a sizable backlog pre-written, nothing besides the main story is set in stone, and I look forward to constructive criticism and feedback. Hope you enjoy the journey just as much as I enjoyed creating it. ----- The cover image is not my own creation, all credit goes to the author. It was listed under "Free to use with modification". I'm hoping that at some point I can replace it with one fan-made. :)

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Shaele
ShaeleAuthorShaele

Dear Visitor/Hoping-to-be-future-reader! Below you can find my own review of this story. I hesitated to do one myself, as it feels cheap (you obviously won’t rate your own story below 5-stars, however, probably currently I’m the only one who can give you the deepest insight into what this story is going to be about. Please take your time to read it through and then make your own judgment about if you would be giving it a try. **** Important: STORY: The story is about who, -in very mysterious circumstances- dies, and gets another chance from a being known as Ioris, before his soul would be cast into the Wheel of Reincarnation. The reason this almighty-being took a liking to our poor protagonist is because his soul was different from the others, something unique, something that this being hasn’t seen since countless millennia. Giving it another chance at life, he blesses our hero, giving him a helper, another higher existence, along with a System, that will aid him on his quest as the Last of his kind, the Last Primal. As a primal, he first has to understands the limits and purpose of his existence, than reclaim what was taken from him, and reclaim his rightful place in the world. CHARACTERS: Most characters have their own personality, their desires, their wants, their needs. There are countless races across the world, almost everything you can imagine in a fantasy world have their presence here. The pacing is slow at the beginning, but that is deliberate, every epic story needs a good start, this is the same here. To understand his future choices and actions, you also need to understand Aiden’s past, his ‘childhood’, the ups- and downs of his life in it’s full spectrum. Writing Quality: There might be some grammar errors, and an occasional slip-up with the genderswap. I try to make sure this doesn’t happen, and I do 2 rounds of checkups (+ I’m using Grammarly as well). Stability of Updates: 1 new chapter between 1500-1700 is something I promised to myself at the start of this journey. One thing I can safely say: This story will not be dropped, no matter what. Unless something happens to me, this story will receive it’s finish at some point in the future. World Background: There are countless hours already invested in this story, among with years of writing and playtime testing in the world you are going to experience. There are literally hundreds of pages of lore that I (and my friends during our RPG nights) created in the past. I did refresh the world and the main story when I decided to go public.

Kronos_God_of_Time
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House
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Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ The biggest problem is the MC. I could barely sit through 10 chapters of this trash. Like I already said the biggest problem is the shitty MC in the first 5 chapters or so he already said he is ****ing stupid more then ones. From the point of the reader he is and absolute brain dead MC. And other problem is the system explains something and then we get MC explain the same thing again with different words. Why do we need the same explanation 2x is this to run up word count or do you think your readers are so stupid they can't understand a simple explanation by the system. But still the biggest problem is MC and his stupid personality & lack of a functioning brain. Then the author explains it as he could not think under stress. When all he had to do is use 2 brain cells and come up with and idea that was not waste your biggest trump card on a common snake. The MC also feels bad about killing common bugs. That's right the MC absorbs power and feels bad about killing some common everyday BUGS. Imagine what a SHITshow this will turn out to be in the later chapters when he needs to kill and enemy when he can't even kill a shitty BUG/ fly and feel bad about it. Some of MC's lines "I already felt pain in my heart that I had mindlessly absorbed so many of them previously, but at that time I didn't really know what I was doing." Oooo no or MC killed 10 BUGS how will he ever live with himself. What a mass murderer he should be locked up in jail for life for daring to kill a few BUGS. "but I would rather avoid senseless killings, even if the target is just an animal or insect" Yea how dare he kill some random bugs so that he can evolve and grow stronger. I can't get myself to read about gooody 2 shoes MC. Maybe this is up your alley but its differently not up mine. Even if he changes later it's just so stupid we have a naive retard for and MC. BTW saved this review so when author removes it i can post it again. Because it was already suspicious there where no low star reviews. It's impossible for a novel to have no low star reviews unless he removes them all for a made up reason.

mrmrcia
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Everton_Mason
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I came for the tags, but I left because of the lack of them, a slow progression romance, a typical alarmist idiot, it would be more of a slice of life for a morphing idiot.

SIS0U
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Amazing novel 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

Andrew_Embler
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I’m in love with it I would love to see this novel get 200+ chapters I feel like he did a lot of planning on the story line and I’m excited to see this story continue

Aardae
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This story had/has great potential, that is undeniable. The story began amazingly only to fall into something I can only describe as an aimleww mess. I'd love to continue further in hopes of the story regaining its once great footing but due to it becoming a paid story, I cannot say it is currently worth the investment to read further. If someone does have insight on how the story progresses and if its worth to continue pay to continue reading, I'd be all ears. I really do like where the story was shaping up to be but currently I really feel like it fell from grace. Thanks for reading, this was just my two cents. Feel free to have your own opinion and I recommend you give the novel a shot, since I am no judge just an opinionated reader :)

Origin_Saint
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To be honest I couldn't get past the first chapter because the book is just not my style. I hate when there is god involved and when the mc isn't given full access to info and I start hearing things like clearance level which to me is absolute crap, though I think it's just me since I love the mc's to be in direct control over their lives with no external influence (like how are you comfortable with something in your soul that isn't you). Don't get me wrong I didn't give the rating just to troll as I mean all the ratings I gave since I could literally see and feel the effort the author put in it from the very first chapter it just hit all the wrong notes for me: 1) I hate the god factor(where they aren't just a classification of beings but unreachable existences and especially when they actively intefer) 2) systems(if the system isn't created by the mc in some way like ai or a naturally occurring system consequence of the world itself it irks me) 3) ignorance (I hate when an mc is okay with being ignorant about their situation like who the f*ck goes like oh no point thinking about it so I won't ask, gotta a little emotional there sorry, especially something that concerns your race or when there like you wouldn't understand, if he can't understand teach him though just push it off) Anyway if you read this to the end thanks for taking the time, all in all I rarely do reviews but I just couldn't ignore how irked I was reading this since I was really looking forward to it as I heard it has a well taught out world

elano77
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Wow. The work is good. The pacing of the story is measured and stable and nothing has felt too forced so far. My main criticism is that the author is a bit inexperienced and this shows in his character design and use of suspense. Some of the characters are too one-dimensional and do things in an unrealistic way. Others are exaggeratedly childish in a way that is unbecoming. For the fight that just concluded, there was so much foreshadowing that the mystery was killed. Foreshadowing should be balanced because it is an object of confusion. It is designed to keep the audience guessing that something might happen. The author used it so much that I knew a difficult fight was coming about 4 chapters before the fight happened. That aside, the world-building of the story is gradual and well-rounded. The premise is an interesting one and the element of suspense surrounding the different activities keeps you interested. The writing quality is superb, no choppy paragraphs or wrong use of grammar and the inter-character interactions are interesting. Solid 4.8 for the story. I would encourage any with an appetite for fiction to read it.

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Blood_Angel_Raven
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Amazing quality, ambsolutly hooked with in the first chapter. Love how it is going so far.I would live to see liliy and audan together. They are definitely made fir each other.

StatikGamingYT
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This... is.. to go... even further beyond!!!! Haaaaaaaa Speaking of further beyond I have already a good first impression to read this. Already know it's top quality when you read the description of the book and say it out loud.

Sacaroth
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Haven't read it yet, just from the main character having my name is perfect for me. Just if you don't know, Aiden means little fire in Irish

Dator_David
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You might want to let readers know they can do a review without getting to the last chapter . By tapping on the screen-scroll down to about this book- scroll down to the 5 stars- tap them-then do the review

Dator_David
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Dator_David
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I ALSO GREW UP PLAYING D&D. MULTI CLASS. DATOR SOJAT 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🐕👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

keimronmontejo
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Raider325
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I like it. The story does revolve around a system but with a twist that I found quite good. I give this book 4/5. The pacing is good, there is a time jump but it doesn't feel like I've been cheated out of a story.

4bidienkingdom
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Great story and thank you for novel.

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