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Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less. Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty. Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
Like every harem stories this one has the same problem, after a while the sheer number of girls reduce their characters into "mere harem members". They lost their unique attributes in the story after got hit by mc's pinky magic. Sometimes events happen unnaturally and disconnected from the story lines. Like Grace suddenly got hidden identity and poisoned. This isn't marathon, no need to hurry, everyone likes nice world building, well thought and deep characters. In the and I can't help but like the story due to unique settings and novelty it brings, especially gender role reversal. Hope author makes it better.