Dear Visitor/Hoping-to-be-future-reader! Below you can find my own review of this story. I hesitated to do one myself, as it feels cheap (you obviously won’t rate your own story below 5-stars, however, probably currently I’m the only one who can give you the deepest insight into what this story is going to be about. Please take your time to read it through and then make your own judgment about if you would be giving it a try. **** Important: STORY: The story is about who, -in very mysterious circumstances- dies, and gets another chance from a being known as Ioris, before his soul would be cast into the Wheel of Reincarnation. The reason this almighty-being took a liking to our poor protagonist is because his soul was different from the others, something unique, something that this being hasn’t seen since countless millennia. Giving it another chance at life, he blesses our hero, giving him a helper, another higher existence, along with a System, that will aid him on his quest as the Last of his kind, the Last Primal. As a primal, he first has to understands the limits and purpose of his existence, than reclaim what was taken from him, and reclaim his rightful place in the world. CHARACTERS: Most characters have their own personality, their desires, their wants, their needs. There are countless races across the world, almost everything you can imagine in a fantasy world have their presence here. The pacing is slow at the beginning, but that is deliberate, every epic story needs a good start, this is the same here. To understand his future choices and actions, you also need to understand Aiden’s past, his ‘childhood’, the ups- and downs of his life in it’s full spectrum. Writing Quality: There might be some grammar errors, and an occasional slip-up with the genderswap. I try to make sure this doesn’t happen, and I do 2 rounds of checkups (+ I’m using Grammarly as well). Stability of Updates: 1 new chapter between 1500-1700 is something I promised to myself at the start of this journey. One thing I can safely say: This story will not be dropped, no matter what. Unless something happens to me, this story will receive it’s finish at some point in the future. World Background: There are countless hours already invested in this story, among with years of writing and playtime testing in the world you are going to experience. There are literally hundreds of pages of lore that I (and my friends during our RPG nights) created in the past. I did refresh the world and the main story when I decided to go public.
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I hope you stay true to your words unlike other authors . :/ p.s good luck and make sure to make a large harem :3
Nice review, looking forward to reading this. There's R-18 and Harem tag, hope there won't be any NTR stunt in future, i just faced this same problem in a novel i was reading earlier, where for story development author done some NTR stunt, which left really bad taste, so i just want to confirm before I begin reading this, that there won't be anything like that here, i can't help myself asking this question after experiencing all that sh#t.
I hate NTR, and can't understand people that enjoy being on the receiving/jerking end. There will be Harem and the R-18 is not just for show. :) There will be erotic content, as it adds a necessary insight into Aiden's later life and how he manages his relationships, but one more thing I will emphasize is that the R-18 is not just for that content. Anyways, for the people waiting for content like that, it will require a bit of time. :)
I just hope the story doesent involve the Mc catching girls like Pokémon I probably won’t read it cuz whenever harem tag is added it is very cliche the hero saves random girl in forest turn out the girl is in a tight spot in a noble family blah blah blah
There won't be hundreds of wives if that's what you are asking. :) While I do not want to give out an exact number as it would raise unwanted expectations, know that the girls I planned are all well-thought-out and will have a slower build-up than in other novels.
Miky_Mate:I just hope the story doesent involve the Mc catching girls like Pokémon I probably won’t read it cuz whenever harem tag is added it is very cliche the hero saves random girl in forest turn out the girl is in a tight spot in a noble family blah blah blah
There's one thing I like. That's authors vowing the story will never be dropped and will be completed....and surprisingly staying true to it. Hopefully this will be something I like.
Going to read this soon
Young_MaSter:Nice review, looking forward to reading this. There's R-18 and Harem tag, hope there won't be any NTR stunt in future, i just faced this same problem in a novel i was reading earlier, where for story development author done some NTR stunt, which left really bad taste, so i just want to confirm before I begin reading this, that there won't be anything like that here, i can't help myself asking this question after experiencing all that sh#t.
Going to read this soon
Young_MaSter:Nice review, looking forward to reading this. There's R-18 and Harem tag, hope there won't be any NTR stunt in future, i just faced this same problem in a novel i was reading earlier, where for story development author done some NTR stunt, which left really bad taste, so i just want to confirm before I begin reading this, that there won't be anything like that here, i can't help myself asking this question after experiencing all that sh#t.
You should go and google the difference between Netorare and Netori. Because I'm sure the guy was talking about the BAD NTR AKA Netorare and not Netori. Unless your one of those sick fucks that like to get your girl stolen. In that case hit me up ill fix this for u. 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Wrong, i don't remember saying i like being cuckold, which eye did you use that led you to say i like it when my gf being stolen?
NSTube:You should go and google the difference between Netorare and Netori. Because I'm sure the guy was talking about the BAD NTR AKA Netorare and not Netori. Unless your one of those sick fucks that like to get your girl stolen. In that case hit me up ill fix this for u. 🤣 🤣 🤣
and how tf did you even know if i mean netori or netorare? did you even read my comment fully?
is there any part on my comment that say netorare/netori?
and you don't need to teach things like netori/netorare, I've read plenty of NTR novel to know basic like that
this is what you called showing off before an expert
NTR is most commonly refereed to as being cucked. Like read your comment again and think about what you said.
Error_4:Wrong, i don't remember saying i like being cuckold, which eye did you use that led you to say i like it when my gf being stolen?
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no matter how many times i read my comment, i don't recall saying i like being cuckold
it's more like i love to cuckold others, that would be the apt word to say
If the reason you say i like being cuckold is because i loved to read novel that include NTR scenes.. then you got it wrong. I immersed myself fully In MC point of view everytime i read novel. You can say i think myself as the MC himself everytime i read Novel i like. so you saying i like being cuckold is really wrong.
NSTube:NTR is most commonly refereed to as being cucked. Like read your comment again and think about what you said.
author should try to make the novel more Eastern like rather than japanese. try reading the novel below if you're out of idea. -> Library of heaven path -Against the God - Fourth prince debauchery - Kings of God - Martial God Asura - Ancient Strengthening Technique - Martial World - True Martial World - Otherworldy Evil Monarch -SAGE MONARCH(Why big words? This is the best amongst all the novel i read). so read them dear author and try to get ideas unique to you only after you read them, and all of the novel i list are eastern.
