Prajnya Shriyan
It's a wonderful narrative that teenagers who are just starting to make friends would be able to relate to. It's admirable that you had the guts to attempt such a premise in your work. Strongly suggested. To pass the time, read a slice-of-life novel like this one. I really appreciate it when you develop characters because it's simple to read and extremely simple for the brain to comprehend. I am reminded of my youth by it. I appreciate the book.
Came from the forum. Itâs my first time doing a quick review., so forgive me if it sounded off. From an overall stand point, I could say you nailed the character. Lively, relatable, alive, those words can be used to describe them. However, I havenât read everything yet, so I canât comment on the dynamic. Although theyâre basic, they work. Next is the writing, you keep it simple, and i think itâs great that you do that. This kind of story definitely benefit from that. Very easy to take in. Development? Itâs there, but very few chapters( Ijust donât invest on paid chapters anyway, for all stories too) make it hard to judge whether if doing it good or not. Just my opinion though. For Stability, Iâm gonna give it a 2 for now since I wasnât there when the update was constant. But if itâs back to 2 months ago, I think a 4-star would better fit your story. Last but not least, the background. Hmm, what to say. Itâs great. Thanks to it not being a fantasy world, many details can be ommitted easily without consequence. And that means info dump hardly exist, thatâs what I feel about this. Wish you luck in the future, fellow author!
Alright you might not like my review but here it is. I'm not always into slice of life type works but this one is good and has a steady pace. The dialogue and I'm guilty of this too may need to be read aloud by the author in the editing process. Some of the wording is more formal then the context requires but that is my incredibly specific nit pick. As in if I absolutely had to find a flaw this really good work that was it.