i like historical fiction and I also like the way you described the background of the characters, it was perfect. The author provided vivid descriptions of the scenes that allow the reader to see the story unfold before them. Honestly, I can't find any mistakes in your story, so good job on writing it. I truly enjoyed reading it

Firstly, I would like to say that I enjoyed your story. It was well-written with vivid descriptions and good dialogue. The book had a nice flow to the story, and I particularly enjoyed the characters, especially Luiz. Keep up the good work, author

Your story was excellent! Your vivid descriptions of the scenes helped me to visualize the world you created, and the natural dialogue between the characters kept me engaged throughout. Your writing style is fantastic, and I found the characters to be well-developed and relatable. The plot was intriguing and kept me hooked until the end, and the background information you provided added depth and richness to the story. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your book and would love to see more from you in the future. Keep up the great work, author!

I find the story to be interesting and engaging. The concept of the protagonist becoming a terminally ill extra in a novel, and her attempt to maintain her character while dealing with her illness, is captivating. The addition of a system adds an intriguing element to the plot. The scene with the elites and the prince effectively sets up the protagonist's struggle to fit into higher society, and her sudden illness adds tension to the story. Overall, the author is doing a good job, and I look forward to seeing how the plot develops.

Your story was an absolute delight! The plot flowed seamlessly, and the characters underwent such captivating development. Your writing style is superb, and your command of the English language is impressive, allowing the reader to become fully immersed in the story. It's no wonder that I found myself utterly hooked from start to finish. I am eagerly waiting for more updates and can't wait to see what you have in store for us next

Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.

Okay, so I like your story, especially the idea that the protagonist is the only remaining Nascent bloodline. You have a nice plot and a good theme. Chapters 1 and 2 are already okay since you've put a lot of description and enough dialogue between the characters, making the reader really know what's happening. However, in Chapter 1, I feel like it lacks dialogue and relies too much on descriptions. So, I suggest that the author writes more dialogue to balance it out. Your story is good, so keep it up, author

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In my opinion, the synopsis has a promising premise, but it lacks sufficient detail about the characters and their world. The final question posed in the synopsis is too general, and a specific conflict or event could make the story more engaging. Additionally, the dialogue at the beginning of the synopsis could be improved to feel more natural and realistic. The exchange of "Sis, let's stay together forever," and the immediate agreement of the other sisters feels forced and lacks depth. To make the story more engaging and realistic, I suggest adding more details about the characters, their relationships, and their specific conflicts.

Your story was nice. I was able to understand the story when I read Chapters 3 and 4, but I found Chapters 1 and 2 confusing. The system and the concept of reincarnation lacked vivid descriptions, and I think the author could have improved or added more descriptions to make it more clear. Despite this issue, I thought the overall plot and story were good, especially in Chapters 3 and 4. However, I suggest that the author revise and improve Chapters 1 and 2 to make them more intriguing and engaging for readers. In summary, your story was enjoyable, but some revisions are needed to improve the descriptions and make it more engaging for readers.

Thank you for your honest feedback, and I will surely take your suggestions into consideration

Your story has a nice plot and good writing style. The vivid descriptions were great and I especially appreciated being able to imagine the scenes and expressions of the characters. For example, when you described how Ryan solved the question and how his teacher Mr. Johnson and classmates were shocked by his intelligence, it made me feel like I was really inside the scene. However, I feel that the dialogue was lacking and suggest that you incorporate more of it. Overall, your story had a good flow and will probably gather many readers with a little revision and more updates. Before concluding this review, I want to say good job to the author. You wrote a great story that I enjoyed and I am looking forward to more updates.

First and foremost, I must say that I enjoyed reading your story the most. The way you described the characters of Duncan and Fiona was great, and their behavior was kind of funny. You also provided good dialogue with vivid descriptions. I loved the bravery of Fiona, especially in the first chapter where she punched her boyfriend - I found that scene quite funny. You have a nice plot and writing style, so I just want to say good job!

Your story was good, but I feel like there's something missing. I can't quite remember what it is, but honestly, it was a good read. There were some typos, but overall, the plot was good and the character development was fine.

This chapter was great keep up the update author

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The way you described the background of the characters was perfect, especially how you portrayed Isadora's character. The author provided vivid descriptions of the scenes that allow the reader to see the story unfold before them. Honestly, I can't find any mistakes in your story, so good job on writing it. I truly enjoyed reading it.

Your story was good, and I especially like vampire stories, so I'm hoping for more updates. I appreciate that it has a lot of dialogue, but sometimes it lacks description. I suggest that the author put in more descriptive details to show the characters' expressions and movements. Most readers want to visualize the scene and the characters, not just the dialogue. Overall, I honestly liked your story, so keep it up. A revision is just needed to add more details and make it even better.

Wow, I like the way you wrote the story, especially your English. It was awesome and easy to understand. I also liked the way you described the story and portrayed the emotions of the characters and their backgrounds. However, I noticed that sometimes you didn't mention the name of the protagonist, which made me forget his name. The only names I remembered were Sofia and Sebastian. But overall, it was a good story. I especially liked chapter 3, which was full of emotion as the protagonist saw the corpse of Sebastian. If you update more often, you will probably gather many readers.