As far as I have read, it has been pleasant, leaving aside some errors, Author, I work more on the pronouns, which sometimes bothers a little, but leaving that aside, it has been a good read

This is just good. Very interesting premise, well executed, good grammar, so far I have no complaints

you are welcome :]

My mistake xD

you are welcome :]

Well, yes, but if you want, wait a few days.

well, the cat Will be fine, I think...

I understand, if that is why I recommend that you read novels and write so you will learn a lot well that's how I learned.

and are you studying literature to start writing?

The truth is, I'm going to lie to you: I haven't studied literature, but I'm starting to study it.

If the novel is similar why am I inspired by it, but it will not be the same as the novel

First of all, thank you very much for reading this far, as I'm still new to this, I could have been guided too much by that novel, so thanks for the advice.

Thanks, for the explanation I was a little lost before, but not now.

If the novel is similar why am I inspired by it, but it will not be the same as the novel

yeah

Thank you so much for the gift

The beginning is similar, since I was inspired by that novel, but it will not be the same, I can assure you.

There is no yuri

Hello, shameless author here. This is the first book I have written of this type. Please read and share any comments or areas that need improvement. Thank you