I think that it is definitely an interesting book since it gets steamy right from chapter 1 instead of the bush I definitely was not expecting it. has decent character development and storyline so far keep up all the good work I will be rooting for you until the end.

can you tell me the name of the website or your discord username then so that I can see if this is a journey that I want to take for my writing

thank you for the tip

when I first looked at the book I was expecting very boring and basic concepts that were done all the time; but I noticed that this book is a true work of art definitely five stars all around keep up all the good work from one writer to another.

I definitely enjoyed the six chapters that I read. this story was very detailed just the way I like it definitely a solid 4.5 star review. keep up the good work from one author to another; I wish you the best of luck on your journey.

yes there is a book one for this and it is called the paradisus Chronicles. that book of mine has a lot more mistakes just so you know because I did that one completely by hand on a computer rather than doing speech to text to my phone. when I finish book two I will be rewriting book 1.

I only read five chapters so far but I definitely think this story is quite interesting creative and very descriptive it makes me feel like I am present in the moment with the characters and I truly love that fact. there were some word gaps and mistakes but that's no big deal I mean editors exist for a reason and from one author to another I understand you can never get it right the first or second time. keep up all the good work I will be rooting for you and your success in this adventure and count me as an official fan of this book.

is definitely a good start and has points for originality so keep up the good work from one author to another I hope that you enjoy your writing journey as well as your readers enjoying it as much as you should. keep the updates coming because I will be joining you on this journey and reading everything.

this book was much better than I thought it was going to be it usually is not in my wheelhouse of books that I read but I give the author two thumbs up for a good book so far. I have only read a chapters of this book but it is definitely worth the journey keep up all the good work from what author to another.

this was quite an interesting read even though I've only read six chapters so far but the main reason why I'm not giving it a perfect five-star rating it's just because it's usually not my style of reading but keep up with the good work I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors from one author to another.

it is definitely an interesting story worth reading but yet somehow I was surprised at how the author ended their chapters. this may only be an early chapter thing since I've only read five chapters; but keep up the good work.

a truly interesting opening I can see where the writer is trying to go I give him points for originality and I will enjoy reading this entire journey until the end. from one author to another keep up the good work.

first off there are four protagonists not one. so not click bait.

one female lead

ok I would love to get paid

thank you very much for the feedback it is much appreciated. I will try to release a chapter every day or so. if you truly enjoyed it like you said you did please give a shout out to any friends or people that you think might enjoy this book.

Good job author unlike all of the other books that I have been reading and reviewing lately this one has an interesting plot and good character development I will recommend it to any of my friends that are looking for a good read keep up all of the good work I wish you the best of success from one author to another.

An interesting read that had me tied in since the start. I have only read six chapters but it is very interesting keep up all of the good work I will be rooting for you.

thanks for the encouragement

truthfully this story is interesting, but there are a lot of mistakes and errors in grammar as well as phrasing. but it is an all around interesting storyline. keep up the work and keep improving