Starting From Monster Musume With A Chat Group

Since this is my own review, I'm making this 5 star for only my own amusement, take no heed to it.I promise y'all once I start another FF, I'm gonna do better, it's not gonna be cringe anymore, I promise, I already have something in the drafts..

Giving 5 stars to counter the 1 stars that complain about MC being OP, it's in the tags ffs... I personally enjoy this, so keep it up author-san.

I only got to chapter 2 before the MCs pure concentrated Cringe nearly killed me.The MC gets like 5 different OP abilitys before the story even starts for doing literally nothing, this isn't usually a problem but its all front loaded. Did I mention that the MC talks like an over excited middle schooler?

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I think the dimensional chat was enough. Why does everyone want to be so OP from one second to the next? Doesn't it make you lose the sense of the trip?[img=faceslap]

The chat is lousy, the relationships are also terrible, and the protagonist's motivations and personality are terrible. He had a good idea, but the development leaves much to be desired.

While i don't see this as bad this is one of those Fanfics that are only good if you daydream of something similar but such a thing could change in the future as so far this in only a few chapters in so i may change this in later.

the beginning was very weak, the presentation of the chat group was without emotion (there is no surprise, i.e. they accept it as if it was something normal and it is not, I can understand that the reincarnated, the other guy in the chat may not be so surprised, but the two girls do not care about anything). I'm getting to is that there is no surprise , normally being normal girls , first they would have to hesitate to accept and then question that they can communicate and worse that the mc mentions that he is a fallen angel and not ask if he is cosplay , and instead of the surprise what they ask is if he can go to another world xD(totlamente lol) , and the rewards are exaggerated (I was expecting to get simple things first, like for example a book that gives you the power to use magic (like black clover), another can be a weapon that changes in different ways, etc, and I could go on listing more, but I get lazy and I only enjoy one reading, because I'm resigned to not always find a good built). - psdta: I'm not saying this to be negative , it's just my perspective after reading .

Eeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh , Cringe ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3/2/2/4/4. Story is kinda hard to read for me since it seems like the MC is overly hyper and out of the chosen chat group members I only recognize 1(which can be a pro or a con but half come from source material I personally wouldn't watch/read) MC is also in his "swords are the best!" phase which he hopefully will grow out of but I won't hold my breath on it. One of his perks is being able to teleport back to his original family which kinda rubs me the wrong way since he died. This is personal opinion but when one life ends, a new one should start and let the past rest.

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Cringe . .

It soo cringe bruh..........cringeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ......xxxxxzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxx

please dont drop this i will donate all my stones just for this to continue. ...................................................................... Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

hello author. You mentioned that you are young and most of the reviewers here are not encouraging at all. But I still want to read it since it has many chapters and it is monster madume which I have never read before. so I want to ask how young you are?

Just wanted to ask are you going to continue updating this series? Because I actually enjoyed it so don’t let the toxic ass reviewers stop you from working on this series. And if nobody will read it then I’d read it.

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Why are the characters in the group chat only women it's sad. ...........................................................................................................................................................................

You didn't need to make him ridiculously OP from the start

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