Left_Nut_Of_Madara

time to reread welcome back

well damn glad i took the time to read this.

you know what.......i could absolutely see that happening.

as interesting as the idea is it completely abandoned the basic functions of a space marine through the process just the gene seed alone would force memories into his head, alter his behavior, simply due to the immense chemical alterations it provides so if you're looking for a space marine that makes sense look elsewhere

a little more interesting than the old one so keep cooking well my friend.

so far so good, the MC is smart, cunning in using his power so he CAN be op but he is not ALWAYS op, and is thinking in the way of a clan leader in a way that the original character failed to do.

im not even going to read it yet i just like the idea........i wonder why.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

while the premise is good the whole story is focused on a unnatural forced narrative and so far has had two moments of unnatural forced narrative as in the start of the MC as well as the system, this is warhammer 40k trust me there are plenty of ways to make a forced narrative that is natural as tzeench is a thing.

Thx

Well that was quite the speech