Nah.

I mean you could just do a domain of slashing wind or something like it as cleave and dismantle can be attributed to the wind sword that Arthur uses

OK so lets start on this one. 1. The title doesn't Match the opening scene in the slightest and that's kind of necessary in some regard and the complete lack of a synopsis isn't helping. 2. All we got is the usual go school in high school DxD. This is overused by this point and is killing DxD fic's 3. The writting quality is good at least very readable. Overall The author desperately needs some original ideas but has the writing part down.

It feels....Drama filled and for someone who has to much in their life already its an absolutely terrible fic but at the same time its incredibly well written and thought out so far so if you can take some tense/drama filled content then give it a read.

Man what a great morning!!! We took back sony headquarters from the automatons AND one of my favorite fic's was updated!!

The rebellion had begun!

This one was strange.

Yeah please do a take over as axel seems enclave material I've been playing too many games with enclave mods and kinda want to see an enclave like UNCS now XD

Love the FMA stuff and yeah that PS from fma was basically pure soul energy so if anything given that those spiders where magical i would bet they would substitute a whole kingdom nicely.

Pretty sure the ice release was due to the rennigan so no dont give hime ice release

Nice chapter and so far you've done great but just don't put to much plot in to soon as you want to save some for later.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Well when even akanu is not to sure it really puts in perspective how tough Kaido really is XD.

This chapter was sudden and ruined any momentum for the plot you had and I'm expecting you to drop in to 20 ish chapters now but if im wrong ill be back but i have just seen this to much and will not invest into a book that will most likely not be finished.

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It's good but for me it just feels like its missing something.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Yo its good to have you back man webnovel has been a little stale lately XD

Just to much filler to have any good storyline.[img=faceslap] [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

What an ending you always do that corn, ill be reminiscing this book for a week XD good way to tell a book is great!

THANKS!!! Looking forward to starwars too!!!!