Reviews of Star Wars: A Single Wish

I've been a fan of Star Wars a long time, and most of what I have to say is in the synopsis. So I wont be giving this story a schedule, but it won't be THAT LONG between updates. I hope this is cool with all you guys. Let me know anything about the lore that might be useful.

I think the book is really good, but it's not for me. It's a very emotional story and I'm not a big fan of those. Another personal gripe I have is that he will, based on his talks with god or whoever that was, only remember his memories with his mother + only when the 'time is right'.

very high votes for such a fast going story that has no core. mcs power is too boring for well known reason, and that with lots of dumb time skips. wont number all mistakes, this story is litered by them in every chapter

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Just started reading and I’ve read that the Mc doesn’t have his memories? What’s up with that? It’ll just be a OC with the highest potential with the force.

i like the start. i like the time period. i like star wars. I don't know how to rate this with only the chapters I've read but I'll rate it 5 stars as a place holder because i like the promise and whats happened so for

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Story so far is great. Grammer is great. Backstory of the mc has great potential. The start of the story is in the old republic timeline, which is the best timeline. The comments explain everything you need to know about the lore so dont worry just sit back and enjoy the story.

You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing

Don’t like the fact this doesn’t have a 5 rating so here full marks. ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………

Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]

I don't know anything about star wars.can I read it too???? do u explain the situations of what happening around so I can get an idea what happening there

I shouldn't be surprised because I'm a fan of The Ancients World, but this fan fict is really good. So now I'm fan of this one too, because the author seems to always do a great job. I love your writing style author-sama, don't change ;) I wish you succes

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This is amazing and I love this story. Rarely do I see a Star Wars fanfic and usually it’s just mid or really subpar, but this is great. I enjoyed all 122 chapters that I’ve read and I binged it through one night. That doesn’t mean the chapters are short by the way, I just decided to read it all at once because I was so invested in the story and I liked it that much. Thank you author for the chapters and story!

I absolutely love this time period and I'm really enjoying the story. Very excited to see where it goes. --------------------------------------------------------------------------

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