CP_Strats
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the books are really good, the first movie was fine, I didn't mind it. The 2nd movie though was atrocious
just by reading your comments I can tell you're a sad individual, you can't take any sort of criticism, and whenever you do you resort to insults as if it makes a right...
An increased fire rate does not equal increased bullet velocity...
that was so forced... smh that was bad
Dont be ridiculous, as if our government would ever take accountability for anything.
you an expert in reincarnation?
tarnish the reputation? as if buying slaves for manual labour didn't do that already.
Renly died and Stannis invaded Kingslanding with the remaining stormlords in the show... unless it was different in the books then the author was wrong
the military is kinda useless in the mcu. did they ever actually do anything other than die in the first iron man movie?
so he was sent 27 years into the past but won't change the future? what's the point? he may aswell just have been sent to the end of the story if he won't change anything... oh I know I could do alot of good and save alot of lives but like you know, no. the whole point of him going to westros was to change the the world for the better, if he doesn't then he's just useless
yeah I don't understand the love of leather armour. chainmail over gambeson makes so much more sense
so you can't read got it.
has a bunch of chapters on his patreon yet posts a word count chapter instead of just posting what he has... if you weren't greedy you'd probably have more people interested but to be honest your story is just copy pasted from the movies with slight changes and more unnecessary gore. it you really want people to pay money to your patreon start with writing something both unique and good. after your word chapter I dropped it, shameful and sad.
did you not proof read this story at all? the amount of typos are baffling. this chapter especially was bad. atleast reread what you write or something.
aaaand yoink