Review Detail of srevdar in Star Wars: A Single Wish

Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]