Was pretty good at first. writing is decent for web novel. the pov transitions are kinda bad but it's not a big deal. then mc becomes the world's biggest emo cry b*tc* you can imagine. it's like anakin from the prequel movies only a thousand times worse. he finds out the jedi kept his parents death a secret from him and he proceeds to go on a rampage killing allies, women, children, and anyone even slightly in his way. he also acts like he's some how morally superior to the sith while monologing to himself how he doesn't even care about the thousands of innocents he's killing. it just gets completely ridiculous and annoying all at once and I eventually dropped.
easyread
Liked by 80 people
LIKEeasyread:What are your thoughts now at this point in the story? 12 months later.
easyread:What are your thoughts now at this point in the story? 12 months later.