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I'm enjoying your novel very much and I do give you Stones when I find the chapters interesting usually you asked for a review so I will try to give you some input. one I think he should come up with his own fighting technique using his doctor skills he'll take out opponents where they lethal or non-lethal. if he was so knowledgeable from his past life he should know about certain drugs or skin care products that he could make and then have patented and sold making extreme amounts of money makeup as well skin care and makeup are billion dollar Industries. third even if he was living under a rock in his past life he would know about certain disasters that they would publicize on the news in the past life several different instances such as when Hurricane Katrina happened the corruption was so bad that they couldn't maintain the dams to release water which caused some flooding you know about bombings and plain disasters now I know what you're thinking if he knows that what about it what good is it well for one thing he could simply call the FBI anonymously and save New Orleans from some flooding if he knows about airplane disaster he could tell them anonymously something's wrong the bomber is going to happen he would tell the police anonymously these are just some instances I can come up with off the top of my head I'm sure you can figure these things out and flush them out a lot better than I can right now. and lastly I just want to say you're doing a great job and please keep up the good work also please make more chapters quickly it's to much to have to wait a whole week for one chapter
I just read from chapter 1 to to this chapter since like 2 or 3 days ago and I had to say you are an excellent writer you've Blended them out of the characters and the Marvel and the Star Wars Universe very well and I am enjoying the book and please continue writing I want more thank you
I vote Rogue as well
I tried to write a comment on the last chapter but I couldn't because it wouldn't let me but this one should count for two and I have to get a hundred chapters in one day LOL Anyway I think you're doing pretty good keep up the good work also I will give you a power Stone just like you asked
I really like your stories in this novel you know the other points of view are pretty good I do however would like the other points of view chapters to be all in one chapter just one really long instead of broken up like you do because I'd like to get on with the story you know I'm waiting several days for that to happen is a little annoying
hello I've come to you today to implore you to continue giving me more chapters I need more chapters of this novel I enjoy this novel too much for it to be dropped I give you plenty of stones as the records probably show so please don't drop this novel and please continue to give me more chapters thank you for your time and effort and give me more chapters please
I assume that you forgot cuz it applies that the MC is ungrateful and not very kind for you see if he'd really would went back to his parents to the village cuz in real life he would have brung gifts for his mother and father and brothers and sisters practical good gift of quality that they couldn't get before for instance some gardening tools of some sort perhaps some raw iron for to make those tools or for the forge a new Anvil you know different tools for there trade and of course you know dresses and and new clothes gifts you don't come back empty-handed like that when you say you're rich makes you look cheap and ungrateful and on a side note even when you're not rich in the country where I happen to live it's seen as a lack of manners if you don't bring something for instance a casserole or some small gift perhaps a bottle of wine or something anyway I just happened to mention it to you for you see I enjoy your story very much and have donated quite a few stars to it so I hope you continue with the quality and quantity of the story please don't drop it