Review Detail of CP_Strats in Star Wars: A Single Wish

Item: Star Wars: A Single Wish
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

CP_StratsLv412mthCP_Strats

You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing

Star Wars: A Single Wish

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easyreadAuthoreasyread

The POV changes have been fixed in later chapters. Can't remember when I started to mark them.

12mth

MelshanLv7Melshan

The MC Will have a wife or harém?

easyread:The POV changes have been fixed in later chapters. Can't remember when I started to mark them.

10mth