Chitawulf
Alright I'm going to be honest if you go into this without expecting to get hooked, you're wrong! This is the type of story that grabs you, thanks to it's intriguing world and setting, the cool and lovable cast of characters and as far as I'm concerned it is well writen! Overall, this is the good stuff, so keep'em coming!
A nice story that gives me Hunger Games sort of vibes, but with otherworldly beings. What really made me enjoy what I've read so far is how the characters are designed. Distinct and unique personalities keep the momentum going, along with the already interesting plot in itself. A solid recommendation from me :) On a side note, the relationship between Silas and Saya is rather endearing, and I find it quite adorable~
Hello dear author! Your story was very nice! Your writing quality was splendid as it was your mother tongue. Story development was intriguing and it keeps up the thrill. The Character design was very good! I am speechless due to the fleshed out characters you have described. Updating stability was, well it stopped. Author please release new chapters and continue your awesome work. World background was wonderful and I felt that I am in a different world. Author please continue your work and I will stay tuned. Don't be disappointed with the comments of skeptics and toxic individuals. Keep up the good work and stay safe.
Honestly, this is not the type of book I would generally be reading (I usually read fantasy plus romance that easy to read). Nonetheless, this book started out really well and has a great description. I can't really say anything about grammar, spelling, typos, and anything related as it was also my great issue. But I think this book is really great for those who liked the genre. Keep writing, author. Good luck ;)
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
This is a very interesting start. The setting is amazing I love it when humanity is close to losing. The characters are vibrant and unique, it's really hard not to picture them while they talk and interact with each other. Even with the small lore dump in CH 5 where the author introduces many characters the story doesn't miss a beat in its delivery. And the simple way it's written helps a lot to read without getting tired]
I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal. The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing. I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far. I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me. I wish this story success. Keep going!
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Sci-fi has never been a particular interest of mine. I prefer literature, the works of Dickens, Austen, Shakespeare, Poe, Stevenson, etc. But I absolutely fell in love with this story. Well-written, well-developed, and well-paced; it's nearly perfect. Each chapter never fails to keep you enthralled and wanting more. You can form connections with the characters, and clearly envision everything that goes on. Truly a worthy and enjoyable read!