Review Detail of Mamelunka in Rekka's Last Stand

I really like science fiction so I'm glad I discovered this story. Mixing sci-fi with high fantasy is very orginal. The beggining sequence in the lab is mindblowing. I really liked Silas and the creation of his character. Definitely my fave so far. I can't really say anything about the grammar and spelling but have not spotted any mistakes. I like your writing style - you can deliver complicated scenes in very clear way which is great for a non-native speaker like me. I wish this story success. Keep going!