Reviews of Reborn: The Childe's Consort

I may not be as promising as the other authors and yet I am here to express myself through my words of imagination. I am still a novice, I know nothing in terms of writing. I make mistakes in terms of grammar but writing is a process, the more you write the better you'll become. Anyways, let's all improve and do our best!

Wow, read it all in one go! The first chapters tell about the first revenge of the MC. I think the author made a good choice, with a "small boss" before developing the plot further, so that the readers get used to the style of writing. I found some grammar errors, and a couple of times I had problems understanding what the author meant. Overall, I understand what's happening, so I guess it's not such a big issue. The MC is the tough type, she takes her fate in her hands, and that's another positive point. Also, it's the first story I read with "Spanish" names, so it's kind of refreshing. Here people usually use german names when writing about nobility, so I needed like three seconds to adjust. The character names are easy to discern (which is not always the case, so another plus!). I'd like to know more about the ML, but I guess I'll have to wait :(

Awesome characters. Another unique approach to time jump and dialogue. I love the names in this book. I hope to be reading more of it. I'm glad you're not one to shy away from extreme scenes. Hope to see more chapters soon.

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Noooo! You haven’t posted in a few and you have to keep going![img=faceslap]Your writing is very clean and extremely smart. Like, you’re good yo. And you write the tough stuff that people wouldnt event want to acknowledge in their books, which i do as well and love to see you nail it. You should be proud.[img=recommend]

Amazing! I recommend this to everyone! I absolutely adored the characters! Good job author, you are doing great, keep it up! I recommend grammar and checking it. Many authors struggle with this, good luck!

Ah, the tale of sweet revenge. A woman's tears will set fire to the land and this story showcases agony, perfectly. The author has used Spanish History and words etc and has provided translations at the end, which are rather helpful. The strength in the plot lies in the character development, witchery and well thought out scenes. The author calls themselves a novice and yet their minimal grammatical errors and appropriate use of 'commas' or even just 'exclamations' are timely, never taking away from the plot. A slow burner but will definitely intrigue you. Good stuff!

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Not gonna lie, I L O V E the writing of this novel. it's really grim, detailled, and the world building is amazing! I support you author, good job!

I-I don't know what to say about this. The story is intriguing, the characters feel real, no grammar mistakes from what I know and the sentances are easy to read. The only downside is that it leaves you wanting more..

Great idea, King! This idea of a novel includes so many things about spanish vocabulary, culture, and also some great characters that I find really interesting

I... Book.. So... Good!!!!!!!!! I love it so far. How the book is developing is pretty darn good. Since I have nothing else to say to fill up the post, I will say lots of words that describe the book. Great. Fantastic. Lovely. Funny. Amazing. Your welcome, cya!

Nicely written! Big plus for the fact that at the beginning you explained about the backgound and all author's notes. An Interesting storyline and expressive characters. Well done!

I have only read begging chapters of this novel . and it really is interesting with strong female lead who is vengeful enough to tear her enemies and authors description of scenes are good and you can see that in the synopsis itself i feel.

First time I read a female lead novel and I love how sharp and vengeful woman can be when their tail is stepped on. Good read keep it up Author!

Hello, dear author! I just wanna tell you that you have a great story and it really hooked me in since the first chapter. Background and characters explanation was clear and that is just what everyone needs! Great job, author. Keep writing! 😉✨

"Reborn the Childe's Consort" is a good novel with the ever-loved Reincarnation theme. I have seen how the author had admitted to being a novice writer (and I wholly agree that we become better as we write on), so I cannot comment much on the grammatical issues and the flow of the story, but I can see potential in the plot itself. It is filled with drama, revenge, and a bit of humor, so I can see it becoming a great read for many readers.

Author do you how great you write! Yes!!! A big yes from me... Historical era...Lovers...Revenge... Wow... Everything is really great...The characters came out do well from your writing that you started liking them from start only...❤️❤️❤️They are vivid, original...and best....Great going author...I had goosebumps all over while reading... I loved it...I am really hooked to your story...keep it up...❤️❤️❤️

This story ahs great potential. Author's writing is very nice, with only some errors that can be overlooked when reading. Author describes the characters very vividly. The plot is developing nicely. Good luck in the contest, author.