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Wow, read it all in one go! The first chapters tell about the first revenge of the MC. I think the author made a good choice, with a "small boss" before developing the plot further, so that the readers get used to the style of writing. I found some grammar errors, and a couple of times I had problems understanding what the author meant. Overall, I understand what's happening, so I guess it's not such a big issue. The MC is the tough type, she takes her fate in her hands, and that's another positive point. Also, it's the first story I read with "Spanish" names, so it's kind of refreshing. Here people usually use german names when writing about nobility, so I needed like three seconds to adjust. The character names are easy to discern (which is not always the case, so another plus!). I'd like to know more about the ML, but I guess I'll have to wait :(

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