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MistressUnderworld

MistressUnderworld

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Will continue to write fictional stories until I find someone to firewalk with me.

2020-08-09 JoinedIndonesia
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    he's a club captain

    Ch 69 Sebastian 0.3
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. Thank you for waiting and the never ending support! (ꈍᴗꈍ)

    Ch 61 Vernon 0.5
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    She is a new character, but who knows. Maybe one story might slip into another.... *wink*wink*

    Ch 57 Vernon 0.1
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    4 more days till a comeback :)

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to CaleBob_Phish

    Hehehe shh...

    Ch 2 Where It Should've Ended pt.2
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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    Hopefully soon, but I am currently working on my other work exclusively. Do check it out while I try my best and stir up new dramas for Jade ;) Thank you for the interest! Hope you enjoy my work so far

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to mango_blossom

    Gotta stay to find out ;)

    Ch 56 For the girl in white
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    Jaded & other romances
    Teen · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to Hua_Li_An

    Thank you so much. I agree with you as I didn't have such a clear idea when I started the book, but I have tried to improve ever since. I appreciate the honest review and suggestion. I'll definitely try to make up for the lack of structure.

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to Scarlettheartt

    Hey! I do some digital art. If you're interested, you can add me on discord and talk more about it. MistressUnderworld#5385 Hope to hear from you. Have a nice day :)

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    Urban · Scarlettheartt
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to xiaohai_23

    Thank you so much! I appreciate the compliment. Hope you enjoy the book (ꈍᴗꈍ)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to YawningBrain

    Thank you! Don't be shy to read more to know what they're capable of ;)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to Littlepunnie

    Thanks for the review! And yeah, I guess 7 deadly sins is a pretty big topic in the art world, but I'm trying to give it my own spin. I'm glad you like the titles (ꈍᴗꈍ)

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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)

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    Attack On Angels
    Action · Katekichi
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    Cool story. And I'm loving the way you introduce the background setting of the story. Super interesting plot. Dying to read more. A minor editing and proofreading could definitely improve the writing, but it's good overall

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    Holy World
    Fantasy · EmpRabbit
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    The descriptions and narration are pretty well done. Some minor spelling or grammar errors, but nothing major. I would like to see what the characters can offer. Keep up the good work!

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    Love or Obsession?
    Urban · IrisSky
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    The cover of the book is so cute! I'm obsessed with the plot and character. So unique and intricate. It's such a fresh and interesting idea. All I can suggest is make the paragraphs shorter. Overall, it's soooo cool. Please keep writing :)

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    Lucifer's horrors circus
    Horror · Esther_Heredia
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Replied to Littlepunnie

    I'm glad you do. Read more, I promise you won't fall in love *wink*wink*

    Ch 2 Where It Should've Ended pt.2
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    7 Not-so-deadly sins
    Fantasy · MistressUnderworld
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    I enjoy the descriptive style of writing and how you painted the plot for the readers. The lines and paragraphs are easy to read too. Cliché plot but the excellent delivery makes a difference. Keep up the good work :)

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    The Crown Prince Thinks I'm a Guy
    Fantasy · Hua_Li_An
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!

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    The last one remaining
    Horror · s8a4o10101
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  • MistressUnderworld
    MistressUnderworld3yr
    Posted

    I love the twist and how you reel people into the story. Love the sci-fi character and environment. Not what I usually read, but this is interesting. I think the formatting can be improved. But overall it's intriguing to read and see what happens next.

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    Abluvion
    Fantasy · LinYang
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