Reborn as Rhaenyra's Twin - (House of the Dragon)

Slow going, no character development, mc is as incompetent and childish as Naruto, he doesn’t have a backbone, and lastly 90% of this fic is him talking about painting

Author please, I beg of you, have a good update rate, I’m desperate for a actual House of the Dragon fic that updates decently and yours has a great idea.

I don't know why this had so high ratings.. but the one reason enough to drop this fic that is MC, he is even worse than Japanese Beta, doesn't had a backbone and just keeps talking paintings. Like wt. f

I ABSSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY I HAVE BUT ONE HIMBLE REQUEST AUTHOR.… NO HAREM thats all teheee This story is amazing however I would refrain from havin Alicent as endgame I think many of us adore the angst derived by Alicents betrayal with viserys and may even could be used as a tension point with viserys as he married not only his children’ best friend but someone he knows his son my be have feelings for but chooses her to avoid his responsibilities with the Velaryon Food for thought if you want any of these ideas

suspiciously their are no comments with less that 4 star . there are always people who will dislike or even hate a fic no matter how good it is . for the records this fic isn't that good either it average u can say interesting idea , a somewhat good plot , poor execution and language lack of details .

Harém: Rhaenyra Targaryen, Laena Velaryon..... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

and a fanfic that the more you read the less interesting it becomes, this fanfic doesn't seem like it takes place in the world of the dragon's house

If friend Nissan also reincarnates, it will spoil the story, I hope something so silly doesn't happen bery gud ............................................

Easily worst ff about HotD ff. Nothing but painting and it's terminology with a super lengthy explanation. MC has personality less interesting than a road side stone 🪨. Politics and marshal training be damned. He didn't bother to check Demon or put him six feet under or burn him with dragon fire or assassinate him ASAP. No push for reform. He and his painting no push to stop the dance. He must already court the high tower wrench of his sister, He is in every way worse than his father. His plot armour is so tick otherwise he might slip on the stairs and break his neck. Waste of time and hair (as you shall pull out hairs with frustration).

Are you gonna give this fanfic a try? It has a lot of potential. (enjdnjdinwiniendieneudedneuduedneuduedueduednueduedundundneudneudnudneunduenduedn)

it starting was good impressive but it give me headache as the story becomes boring and sady it loses it appeal ,the world is fought with swords.magic,blood, dragon but this story have only words as weapon and for me mc is not a dragon heir

I couldn't read anymore, it was boring. MC only interested in art and he complains sooo much and does the most random shit. and him being reincarnated doesn't mean anything

The story is strange, like a poorly written translation, you can read it without a problem but I don't like it.

nah i was wrong this truly Is not whort it

5 stars for that synopsis, and honestly, I haven't read Game Of Thrones or whatever this is, but I'm going to give it a try. You got to write a certain number of words, so I wrote this sentence.

Hands down, this has got the best first chapter I've ever read in a fanfic, it just sucks you in. The main character's shown to be a down to earth guy with a good personality, solid views and the balls to go with em! great introduction! I expect no less quality in the coming chapters

Great story telling. Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development

The story is very good, I can assure you that when it comes to character interactions, world interaction, quite good OCs with their own moments, if the spelling errors in this fanfic bother you, there is no, at least that's what I see, different points of view that it interprets the characters very well, this fanfic involves music and art in a fairly decent and good evolution so far it took me two days to read it completely, which is until chapter 89 and the truth is I want to read more, it makes me very curious how As all this develops, the negative point I would give would be the battles, at least from my point of view, they did not manage to excite me very much, but they are well written and the update rate leaves a lot to be desired, but this fanfic is worth reading.

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Muy buen fanfic en mi opinion y he leido muchos de los cuales pocos se destacan como partiendo por su escritura y su forma de contar y expresar la historia a mi parecer le de realismo y credibilidad no como otros fanfic que lo unico que provocan es verguenza ajena en uno, como por ejemplo chetando al mc de poderes fuera de lugar o con la tan usada basura trama de los multiversos que a mi parecer no hacen mas que ensuciar todo y creando un caos en mundos pero bueno es mi opinion y apresio este fanfic sigue asi autor pues si bien nose si seguiras con este fanfic tu forma de escribir es muy buena y tu gramatica tambien lo es.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]