Adam_Roberts_3660

the MC is weak and no development no one cares about an artist that only wants paint pictures rather than be a proactive member of House Targaryen.

good start to the story but the grammar needs a little work and your use of underscore and repeating things makes the story extremely annoying to the point of not wanting to continue the story. I hope your future stories become better.

i couldn't get passed how dumb the MC is as a reincarnated person who should be much smarter or at least have common sense. The grammar is great the story over all is good. I just prefer a MC to be smarter, but I'm just being picky. Author keep up your good writing.

author, keep up the work. the story kept me wanting more. i am not into harem stories but I like this one. maybe consider adding Lexa to the harem. I'm looking forward to rest of the story.

this FF has no idea of dates and events Robert's Rebellion was in 282 AC not hundred years prior. if you're going to do a Asoiaf FF plz get basic dates and events correct.

i like the idea of a port at sea dragons point it would be best for the main land. but a port on bear island isn't a bad idea either. Mormonts are one of the most loyal houses to house Stark.