InmortalE

It bothers me to write this because it is a great story but also this is an example of what not to do when writing or translating a story. I recommend you read this story, it is very good and totally worth reading, you will not regret seeing this story, from its writing to its characters are very good. Now the bad things are 3 aspects; First, from chapter 120 onwards the way of writing is frankly bad, not because it is not coherent or not understood, it is rather in describing certain situations that is so bad that it is annoying, Second (this point is for the readers), it is very clear that at the beginning you can see what kind of story it is, as such complaining about the story just because it has Harem, Yuri and more is nonsense, Third and last point, the supposed powers of the character are not bad or exaggerated but they are poorly represented, there are other stories where the protagonist is very strong but his scenes are credible and in accordance with the story, the problem here is that in this story these situations are poorly developed.

The story is good, of course there are mistakes but they are minimal, is this story worth reading, the answer is yes. Now the bad thing about the story, the author does not know much about One Piece or simply forces some things, although the real problem is the character, is bad / is good, being honest, yes, the character is well written and of course is someone who decided to do everything to survive and as such there will be strange or logical things that a person from our world would do being in One Piece, and I clarify that the character is someone from our world, is not originally from One Piece, so it is understandable that the character acts like this. In short, is this story worth reading, YES, the answer is yes, because here we can see a different perspective of the world of One Piece.

You know, if you're going to give him a reward for successfully completing the Quest, you can give him more Spirits to accompany him, some of them could be as follows: From the seirei tsukai no blade dance universe, there is the Spirit [Terminus Est] the Queen of Steel, it is a sword with the Demon Slayer attribute. From the Tales of zestiria universe, [Fethmus Mioma] is a Holy Sword with the holy fire attribute. There are also the Spirits from Fate and Date a Live, but they are too strong for the current level.

Thank you for bringing this story once again ✌️, it's one of the best in my collection 💪 Its narrative, characters, world building, action, and surprises are fun to watch by changing aspects that every viewer was expecting without ruining the original plot and only making it even better.

What the hell are those guys talking about, Medea is one of the best characters I have ever read, she is by far the best 🙌 👍 Don't listen to them and continue writing this amazing character.

Hikari Hyuga

Mikoto Uchiha

Damn, this is finally getting good, take my rocks and give me more chapters.