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Tough go say, the Spirit Hall could see him as a threat.
It's basically when person, usually a guy gets his girl stolen from him normally unknowingly.
Brother shes a way older then him, in terms of years lived. If anything shes the one who should go to Jail.
This sounds like an excuse a lame virgin makes for his pack of bishes.
Yeah but when has that been Lebron's fault? Lebron has always played well even in those losses, he didn't suddenly lose his skills as Tristan has apparently.
Facts. And shes prettier.
The interactions are a bit better but still lifeless. It's people just talking at Luka then he barely responds or gives some robotic one most of the time. Also Luka is dumb. He wants a normal life but also wants to be a great footballer. Im sorry but be realistic, that's never gonna happen. As a football fan in his past life how is he that ignornant and naive to that fact.
Bruh. He grew up watching football he should know how crazy people get about footballers, like when he died did all his braincells die with him?
Agreed, much better choices.
Lol, I was thinking the same thing.