Reviews of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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There are stories with op mcs and there are stories that go too far into the opposite direction. It's clear at times how the author tries to portray a desperate situation even if it doesn't make any sense. Biggest gripe about this story is the inconsistent characterization of the Mc, one day the author portrays him as a young adult fully aware of consequences, objectivity and long term planning. Next time he writes him as a 6 year old kid. Why not ask his peers or teachers to review the curriculum? Why is he even training if he knows genin are child soldiers? Would being bullied by kids really bother a 20 year old transmigrator? If that's what the author intended he should've the Mc should have been at least aware of the discrepancy.
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It's pretty boring so far, Feels like a nothing burger, I get having a slow buildup and all but this just doesn't feel like a satisfying read to me. All you get is a desperate mc and all you feel is pity for him and that's all, The writing quality is good but the progression is not and that's all I have to say. Will update the review depending on whether the novels gets good or bad.(Some people might complain that it's too early to judge the novel in just the first 12 chapters but I think it's fair, people are even giving the fic 5 star just on the basis of his previous novels, so I think it's fair)
i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes
I'm finally ready to review this, I think most positive reviews are cuz of the previous work of the author but the mc is having too much discrepancy, I get the author wants to portray the feeling of the mc but wanting to cry cuz he missed targets, that just seems awkward, I'll just say I'm not feeling the story, I get the author doesn't want to do the op mc stuff, doing the opposite is ok but this is going to far especially with the unnecessary angst
Tldr; It is a mixed bag with the potential to get better. The story is realistic and I’m fine with the pacing, the problem is the MC is average at best in terms of intelligence and below average in creativity so without plot armor I do not see how he will survive. Longer review: Believe it or not, I don’t dislike how the MC is being beaten down. The idea of dropping a competent mc into a rough situation and seeing him fulfillingly get stronger bit by bit can make for an excellent story. My issue is that the mc does not appear to be competent at all. Sure, he seems to be quite hardworking and has passable willpower. But he is incredibly uncreative and dull. Seeing an average person thrown into a very miserable situation is not particularly fun to read because without plot armor that average person will die 99% of the time. Thus, I feel like the author will have to introduce plot armor or to suddenly drastically increase the MCs intelligence if he does not want the MC to die the second he meets the enemy, and that makes for poor writing.
It’s crazy how used to ’instant-OP’ MC’s people are.. this is an incredibly down-to-earth and realistic approach of something who went through a bunch of traumatic experiences and is having a hard time catching up. Is It perfect? Of course not lol. But it’s approach is something you really don’t see that often in this series and that alone makes it unique and (imo) fun to read. Can’t wait to enjoy more of it 🥂
I get you wanted to do a flip from your last two OP mc’s, but you went to far the other way! He’s plain boring!! From his lack of talent to his thought process, he’s boring with no redeeming qualities. The eternal gennin was a cool choice at first, but the mc barely improved still, and the character is just as bland as the mc. Please either give him a crumb of talent in ANYTHING, or do a timeskip to where he not constantly moping about being bad.
Trash. Utter trash. The fic is too angsty. The mc is stupid, wimpy, overly dramatic and always cribbing. He has no talent, no golden finger, no nothing. He is too week and still cant beat the 2nd worst of the academy (as of now). It's been 18 chapters and he still hasn't improved at all. Honestly expected better from the author since I've read is HP fic. Hope it's gets better.
😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒There comes a point where it stops hooking, the first six chapters are very good, the following are the same six chapters. I understand that you have a slow way of developing the plot. But I feel like you're not going anywhere. that the character is poorly defined, both his character and his actions are boring and you end up stopping reading. mmmm I think the problem with everything is how you present the character, he is the center of the whole story. and if it is not well thought out it is boring, there are no surprises, I think they tell you that it is beta mc, they mean that it is an idiot without content. that is to say, there are characters who are idiots but as they develop they end up being charismatic.
