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It's a wish fulfilment story frankly because it can't possibly be anything else. Story should have just focused on what readers wanted, probably the oshi no no was the most interesting plot point with his children also being reincarnators. If this wasn't a reincarnators novel well... As the author points out he really didn't intend to be a fate universe and it really shows. Theres a fundamental ignorance if what a magus is. Should have stuck to some generic DxD universe.
Does his creations scale with level? Because if not he is in for a rough time. Everything scales vertically hard in danmachi. Also his no melee philosophy frankly naive. I hope he realizes he cant just half-ass the dungeon. On another note I like the idea of joining an new familia as a newbie is basically a death sentence. With no support structure, he might get past the goblins. Since it seems even normal citizens can kill them. But then the newbie are going to hit the ceiling hard with the stronger monsters on the mid-level floors.
Theres not much subtlety in the writing. Mc is kind of a sociopath, feels awfully flat at times, but the characters do feel internally consistent with their background. Pacing is good so far, but story feels like a reading a speed run to the endgame level cap. Good thing the author left out systems , ROB , and non cannon crossovers.
It really did feel edgelordy. Personally when someone I wasn't too close with died I remember feeling somewhat amused about the whole situation. A little surprised and out of place. Personally I think most people would be given a third of inheritance away, simply because of rumors spreading about being a cheapskate. Also gives them an excuse to leave the house, or he could move out instead. The way he handled it was really immature and unprofessional.
You might want to do some cursory research into start up founding. Maybe look for seed money for investors, networking, renting out hardware, patenting etc. For chizuru maybe some small skits on youtube or nico nico, to build a fanbase and maybe negotiate some adspace when you hit it big.
Was this necessary? I mean isn't being Zuckerberg and Bill Gates enough.