No, it's just my opinion but this Aiden and Evelyn stuff is overcomplicating stuff

sorry if I was too hard on you but I feel you have a good story but u are making it troublesome by dissociating his name.

yes just rewrite it without the Aiden and Evelyn element, it's making the story needlessly complicated

I'm out, just messed up the story because u wanted the MC's name to be Aiden, if u wanted it that bad u should have just made him an OC to take Basara's place, what parent would like to find out their child is another person. You said readers should drop suggestions but it seems u don't acknowledge them

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agreed, why are you so focused on using the name Aiden , he's reincarnated as Basara so why don't you use the name, you aemre forcing this too much, determine his name and clarify it once and for all, it's not a big deal.

i agree, choose a name for the MC Author, you already said Aiden is dead that he is now Basara. I Don get why you are attached to the Aiden name unless it's yours

why do u like status pages do much

they will cancel each other out infinte spin vs infinite distance should be like undefined or zero

Nice. can u drop a link to the raw. .......

this ROB stuff is getting old and you made mc a simp who doesn't get revenge on anyone who hurts him

so will he be a simp who doesn't get revenge because a siphoner getting jumped by a vampire is very unlikely. i know u don't want ur mc to be overpowered but don't downgrade him too much

why must it always be a system fic

i agree with this comment, how can he be toji with cursed energy? this is click-bait

i honestly don't know, I'm really stuck on it. I started writing another young justice book on my patreon. i don't know whether i will continue this book

*shikigami

what do you mean by 'does not stand alone'

[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]thank you for the quality work and steady updates. Your work was very good.You have incredible talent, if ur thinking of being a writer, you'll make it big.looking forward to any of your new projects

you just messed up the story with this heavenly restriction

dropped, this will make it boring. what's the point if he's too overpowered. Overpowered fics have just become boring