I get you wanted to do a flip from your last two OP mc’s, but you went to far the other way! He’s plain boring!! From his lack of talent to his thought process, he’s boring with no redeeming qualities. The eternal gennin was a cool choice at first, but the mc barely improved still, and the character is just as bland as the mc. Please either give him a crumb of talent in ANYTHING, or do a timeskip to where he not constantly moping about being bad.
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