Review Detail of N_Nelson in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Item: Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
Rating: 3.8

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N_NelsonLv41yrN_Nelson

I'm finally ready to review this, I think most positive reviews are cuz of the previous work of the author but the mc is having too much discrepancy, I get the author wants to portray the feeling of the mc but wanting to cry cuz he missed targets, that just seems awkward, I'll just say I'm not feeling the story, I get the author doesn't want to do the op mc stuff, doing the opposite is ok but this is going to far especially with the unnecessary angst

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

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I feel as though the crying had a bit more behind it than just failing to hit the target. I think that was just the straw that broke the camel's back, the bulk of the emotional baggage was probably due to him being torn away from his cozy life and placed into a world full of child soldiers, with him being one, all without consent.

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