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leo264mthReplied to EzioAuditore_1Yeah i agree, It has got to the point that it has killed my intrest in a story when it is used
Cato seems hesitant to even mention her as I ask, "Why the hesitation, Cato? It would seem like the perfect teacher for those learning the spear?" Cato then answers (Well, you see, the way she tests those that are worthy of her is rather extreme. to become her student, not only do you need to have the personal requirements that she looks for in a disciple, but she will also ask those looking to learn to fend off the shadows for three months, and those shadows are powerful ul, as while they are shades, they are numerous and they feel no pain. Most do not survive, and she then kills those that do due to being lacking in some way.)- leo265mthCommentedCh 26 Chapter 25
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+1
-He accepts but refuses to fuse temporarily with another Stern Ritter and and go himself in the Throne of heroes to temporarily become one of the Heroic Spirits - leo265mthCommented
Will be completly honest, did not like this as the first chapter of the novel. I always think that showing the future on the first chapter like this always takes out the experience since you are basically spoiling your own novel, and another reason is that most probably the novel will be dropped way before reaching that point and hence it feels like a teaser to a movie which will never drop. Complely reductant in my point of view
Ch 1 Chapter 1: Shibuya Station - leo265mthCommented
Pokemon champion and master should be swapped
Champion class- 4 Palladium stage Pokémon/ 6(peak) Diamond stage Pokémon - leo267mthReplied to Amomon
Good choice
Its design was an impressive fusion of a great axe and a war cleaver, with a long handle wrapped in a combination of cotton, leather, and rayon. The sheer presence of the martial spirit left an indelible impression, and Zeng Wei couldn't help but admire its menacing appearance. - leo267mthReplied to HinatamainwaifuBibi Dong had not just decent innate soul power; she possessed innate full soul power!
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I don't like the reviving thing, would have been better to just have giyu and be done with it, reviving other demon slayer seems pointless to me
[If Rengoku can be revived, what about other deceased people?] - leo269mthCommented
I don't know why but always hated the party function. Would have prefered if you had taken this away rather than gamers body and mind.
Even though they could have their thoughts or memories taken by the enemy thus leading a leak of Dark Guilds the possibility of them wanting me alive to essentially break their limits of mortal bounds if I use the Party Function to them. - leo269mthCommented
Honeslty if there is one world where i don't mind harem, it is dxd.
This book has been deleted. - leo269mthReplied to SinX_Five
Can you explain what this is refrencing?
That Kimi Nishino chapter is such a turn off. sorry guys! I see many people complain and I can't blame them. Headache, really. - leo269mthReplied to DaoistKQnDFL
Bro there is not much diference in strenght between a special jonin and a chunin, your list is plain wrong.
Special Jonin:200-500 - leo269mthReplied to Jovami6729
Not being able to get stats with training is still too much of a loss, the gamer power itself is overpowered, if you don't want him to be op, could have just chosen something else.
I purposely added 2 of my stat points into STR while add 1 to LUCK to have a better chance in the future but I can certainly feel the effects occurring on my body. - leo269mthCommented
Whats with fanfic authors and their fetish with writing prolouge such as this when it has no impact whatsoever on the character. A significant other cheating can cause serious trust issue to the person being cheated on but i know there won't be such a thing just from experience of reading fanfics. Sorry for the rant but this just seriously killed my desire to read this fic.
Ch 1 1: The End! - leo269mthReplied to Palpable_Banana
I think its a valid criticism in a world like naruto were there are a lots of characters which can be used. And i though it was more of an issue that most of his interaction was with the ocs and not even the original cast of the show which made no sense to me. Again i would have been fine with oc if this was a fanfic of a show with a lot less charcters shown like hunterxhunter or was in the warring state, but the fic is in the time period of naruto hence i didn't like the inclusion of ocs.
- leo269mthCommentedCh 12 Chapter 11
- leo269mthReplied to James_Bond_007
Bro what
Overwhelmed with gratitude upon realizing that the feast was arranged for him, Isaac couldn't help but reflect on how different his life would have been if he hadn't crossed paths with Julia. - leo269mthReplied to Passerby_Venne
What are you waffling about bro💀
Rolling several rounds on the ground outside the tavern, Bonney finally managed to come to a stop.