I get you wanted to do a flip from your last two OP mc’s, but you went to far the other way! He’s plain boring!! From his lack of talent to his thought process, he’s boring with no redeeming qualities. The eternal gennin was a cool choice at first, but the mc barely improved still, and the character is just as bland as the mc. Please either give him a crumb of talent in ANYTHING, or do a timeskip to where he not constantly moping about being bad.

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Kinda wish MC just had the memories. With him not having them, losing muscle memory somehow, and being the bottom of the class by far at the start. It just makes it seem like he can only survive through Plot armor. Also naruto stories with no memories always feel wierd because all the trained ninja just ”somehow” don’ notice it. 11d Alpha_Ace Badge Alpha_Ace Exp 9d ElderDragon25 Badge ElderDragon25 Five in the morning no thankyou

This fanfic it’s No for me 4d

ok

looks interesting