nishidurani
A nice book with a thrilling story! I have commented on the said issues but don't worry about it! It was awesome! Specially the end ot the chapter. It was mind-blowing! By the way you have potential to become a great author! Write more and practice more for more improvements. The thing you needed was a story to tell and a creative mind, the rest will follow!
man the story is getting more and more interesting it's has such great plot with such a great character I love the every part of this story it's have few error here and there and some grammar mistake otherwise it's was a story to look forward good work hope so more people should read this kind of gem ....♥️
"Oh that lily where was she touching you? Nothing special she was just touching my lips with hers" You should add this line in your synopsis. I really laughed reading the chapters. The characters are sweet and funny. I enjoyed reading it after all the dramas. Most important thing is writer has started working only a month ago, yet all her books have a different flavour of life. Clap for you.