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Lindsay_P

Lindsay_P

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2020-12-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Posted

    I am very much enjoying this story. it is an interesting twist on the transmigration trope. I went ahead and bought all the chapters! the only thing I'm confused about is there seems to be a chapter missing between 15 and 16? the storyline completely jumped. I'm a bit confused.

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    I Might Have Too Many Husbands
    · QingTing
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Posted

    the story is really good, as are the drawings. I went through 5 chapters in no time at all, and cannot wait to read more. the only complaint I have is that the dialogue is a bit clunky. Hopefully it gets better the farther we get into the story

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    Resurrection Reunion: The Exclusive Love
    · Ake Culture
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Replied to bubblebunnytea

    I'm a true crime junkie. I do a lot of reading.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess
    altalt
    The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart
    Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Replied to Jaywalker_Holmes

    only if you manage to open the jugular. it would take multiple passes with a knife to kill someone by slitting their throats, which would make for a slow and painful death.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess
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    The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart
    Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Posted

    it seems like an interesting story, but I just can't get past all the editing errors. it makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. ....

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    My roommate is a devil
    Fantasy · nishidurani
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Commented

    talk about unnecessary violence; what was the point of slitting her throat? if she's completely unable to move, it would've been easier to suffocate her with a pillow...

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - The Sickly Young Princess
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    The Evil Emperor's Fragile Heart
    Fantasy · Jaywalker_Holmes
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Posted

    this story is a solid idea, however I felt the constant shift between 2nd and 3rd person to be extremely annoying. could definitely do with some reworking.

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    The Villainess's Mission
    Urban · Sihansiregar
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  • Lindsay_P
    Lindsay_P2yr
    Commented

    anyone else find the switch between 2nd and 3rd person annoying?

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    The Villainess's Mission
    Urban · Sihansiregar
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