Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in My roommate is a devil

A nice book with a thrilling story! I have commented on the said issues but don't worry about it! It was awesome! Specially the end ot the chapter. It was mind-blowing! By the way you have potential to become a great author! Write more and practice more for more improvements. The thing you needed was a story to tell and a creative mind, the rest will follow!