I loved how you described everything, I love descriptive books, they make me feel like I am there with the characters. I love how you wrote your dialogue. Absolutely keep writing, and follow your passion! Please more chapter updates! :)
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LIKEIt's ok we all make mistakes, especially has new authors. We are both learning. I recommend using the app grammarly. It will catch the minor mistakes for free, and works really well. You can go premium and it will catch it all lol. I use it for the minor mistakes, and go back to edit it. Best of luck!
nishidurani:Thank you for your kind words, in spite of the mistakes I had done