Reviews of My MCV and Doomsday
My MCV and Doomsday
Dark Litchi
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What? You thought it was a random truck? Wrong its Optimus Prime. What? You thought its a random plane? Wrong its a motherducking space ship.
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The Synopsis is BAD. It made me NOT want to read it for a very long time!!! It made it sound like a comedy. It's not a comedy! It made it sound like the MC only had a magically OPed Minibus. NOPE! The Mini bus is powerful and able to be modified even more to become better. The Mini bus starts out on par with the power of the Zombies. Also, the MC and other people in the world can get more powerful. There is also a type of level attached to the different people and creatures in the world too :)
Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^ P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
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This is a cookie-cutter apocalypse story that's actually a cultivation novel in disguise. As usual, the world ends in zombies and China numbah 1 in zombies as well. Our MC, who had access to a mysterious alien tech, starts Doomsday prepping with limited resources. Unfortunately, once the end of the fuckin world actually comes, he promptly goes around offending all with his minibus and a harem that he collects with his MC aura. There's an inkling of a larger plot, about a secret Illuminati thing that knew the apocalypse was coming, but that's left undeveloped for a large part of the story. The minibus he owns is a super advanced futuristic mobile base and the MC is diligent in enhancing it's features only to never use them. He added a biological lab and never used it more than twice. He added an automated 3D printer for weapons and completely forgot about it the next chapter. And here's the best part of the bus. It uses a potato Cannon that fires compressed air. In this universe, apparently nothing's stronger than compressed air. The side characters never question the complete breakdown of physics. With the MC in the picture, spacetime inversion, advanced science, FTL travel, the second coming of Christ... Everything is possible. And his ability, which has nothing to do with the capabilities he exhibits are completely ignored and not questioned by a single character. The plot is a nightmarish mishmash of standard cliches. Around chapter 600, the author got bored of the junk in the novel and took the plot to Japan for the standard Chinese racism best racism. Leave your logic and rationality elsewhere to read this
It's probably gonna be good, but at least it's science probably is focused on mechanical engineering & electrical engineering and I hate to say this but I don't want it to compare with Epoch of Twilight because it's science are all over the place. It's another unique Apocalyptic novel I hope it's gonna be good.
First let me say that I'm a big fan of stories that involve the apocalypse, zombies, rv's or mechanically interesting vehicles and roadtrips. And I think if you too are interested in any of that then DON'T READ THIS. Even after I convinced myself to mentally treat this story as Steampunk (meaning any technology can work like magic and that's ok) I still was annoyed at how ridiculous pretty much everything was. And by everything I don't just mean the physical things (still can't figure out if the van is bigger inside like a Tardis) - but character interactions / development / world building / dialog / consistency - everything. Out of the 25 or so things I've added to my library here this is the first to be removed.
Truck-sama is graceful..................................................................... Truck-sama is powerful.................................................................... Truck-sama is... wait, what? its a minibus? well, whatever. I just hope its harem and the most important tag, ******! come on, its apocalypse! whats wrong with ******?
Ok i tried. I tried so hard to see what the rest of you see. The quality story... never explained anything... From the beginning you are pretty much just told the resaults, but have no way of visualizing anything due to no explination as to how things happen. I mean can anyone tell me what he is driving? What does it look like? Cus i have no idea... Also time seems to be rather ****ed up. A few days after everything went to hell and we are in mad max territory??? Now no one cares about eachother anymore. To the point that there is food shortages already? As for the translation... there are a lot of mistakes in the first 20+ chapters. Some i honestly don't know if they are the authors or the translators fault tho. I loved the premise. Zombie apocalypse and the MC is basically either a mechanic or something from a rts. That hasn't happened sadly. And the way things are going i'm gonna struggle to continue going. If this is your first read in a while you can have a good time here but if you are looking for quality then look ells where. My final verdict is that the author need to mature as a writer and this is a decent but not good first try(or so i hope). Sry if this piss u off cus u love it but it's kinda really bad...
I'm quite enjoying this novel. I'm gonna put it as one of my 10 current novels to watch everyday, so hopefully the updates will roll in daily cause I won't be able to survive the zombie apocolypse with only a couple chapters a week. I'll be a sad crying zombi cause I couldn't run fast enough. Actually I can't run at all. Whatamisaying, I'd totally die right off the bat. But even so, I want to feel like I could, by reading this novel. And so far, it's working. --- on another note, is it only me that wishes to save all the people? I'd fill up that minibus so quickly. Btw, for all you non-readers, this story contains a minibus, I know, shocking right? Idk. I thought it was pretty cool tbh. ---- on another another note, I'm not sure if this is 140 characters yet, did I ramble enough already??? To summarize my review: Need more, feed me chapters already! [4.4]
