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SpintFXLv126yr
2018-11-14 23:26

Ok i tried. I tried so hard to see what the rest of you see. The quality story... never explained anything... From the beginning you are pretty much just told the resaults, but have no way of visualizing anything due to no explination as to how things happen. I mean can anyone tell me what he is driving? What does it look like? Cus i have no idea... Also time seems to be rather ****ed up. A few days after everything went to hell and we are in mad max territory??? Now no one cares about eachother anymore. To the point that there is food shortages already? As for the translation... there are a lot of mistakes in the first 20+ chapters. Some i honestly don't know if they are the authors or the translators fault tho. I loved the premise. Zombie apocalypse and the MC is basically either a mechanic or something from a rts. That hasn't happened sadly. And the way things are going i'm gonna struggle to continue going. If this is your first read in a while you can have a good time here but if you are looking for quality then look ells where. My final verdict is that the author need to mature as a writer and this is a decent but not good first try(or so i hope). Sry if this piss u off cus u love it but it's kinda really bad...

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